Really impressed with this one
the lighting effect as she opens the curtains and the subtle elements of glass and rain very intense, as for any changes really cant think of any as you do some solid work and would love to see you make even more to this, Well I am pretty suprised I was glad that this was better then I had expected and I do hope to see more from you this was a good all around solid animation entry, Alright you do have something here I was actually pretty impressed with what you have going on here, I did however think some extras could be added and you could change some things, but overall you have done well on this.
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as for any changes really cant think of any as you do some solid work and would love to see you make even more to this
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