((( OK )))
Well it was getting good untill i saw a clock, anyways i thaught you really had somthing here, ohwell whatever floats your boat, good character, i like the idea of a pimp stick you should have used it so magic comes out or somthing, and maybe add some more detail in the backround, overall it was a good start, could lose a character in there though...
MOVIE COMMENTARY: Good start...
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