XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Infestation: Part 1]

((( CONFUSING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm this was abit confusing, not sure what was going on but it did have some nice artwork and good use of color, just abit confusing and verys hort...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer, give it some sort of story, and some sorta character base...

~~OVERALL~~
A very very short animation confusing but an animation at that, check itout sometime, if you dare...

~X~

[Joey's Story ep. 2]

((( COULD E IMPROVED )))

~~REVIEW~~
This could be improved. the animation wa sok actually kinda smooth, the volume seemed abit low though, and the backrounds were abit bland as were the characters aswell, its ok but can be better...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail like with the characters, eyes and mouths, and some backrounds would help more details showing more then just the lines...

~~OVERALL~~
A good animation but can be better with some detailing...

~X~

[Butlers]

((( MADE ME LAUGH )))

~~REVIEW~~
Really nice job on the characters, mainly the hair, showed some good detail and effort, the characters looked funny with there skinny arms and all, the flash was really funny there voices did seem abit low but still funny stuff, nice animation...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well i would suggest some "SUBTITLES" just incase the volume is lower for other users, will also help to understand whats being said better, also you could take the flash into other scenes maybe have them walk around the city or something...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny flash with some entertaining and strange characters, really nice animation...

~X~

[Blood Ravens Story]

((( DECENT FLASH )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was a decent flash i was actually very into it, lots to see and has a certian style to it that i liked, very good work on the story very well done, i did wait abit of time before it loaded though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Download time 4megs was massive almost killed my machine, i use 56k and im sure alot of other users do aswell and something to think about when making really big flashworks and the filesize is that big think about the user abit as they might not beable to download as some people may be impatient, compress it abit or cut it down somehow but remember that alot of us us 56k.

~~OVERALL~~
A decent flash with some good thought and effort behind it, but needs compressing badly...

~X~

[blockheads]

((( VERY GOOD SKETCHING )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was very impressive, i love the sketch drawings, the animating of them was actually notbad either, i love teh sketsches though it was abit different and had a unique style to it, it also playedout a sorta story, very nice job i would love to see this in a series...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make more for sure, and maybe better animating i mean with more limbs animated, also some voices from the characters to give a sense of more of a story...

~~OVERALL~~
A great and unique flash, different and while it has no color it has a sense of style to it...

~X~

[Boredom is Bad]

((( NICE GRAPHICS )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was sorta funny, the "ARTWORK" was the best though from head to toe it had great shading and detail, and awsome animation, flowed very easy and smooth, i thought the "AUDIO" from dumb and dumber shouldnt have been used it just didnt look right...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe faster loading so you could cut here and there to give it a better loading time or something...

~~OVERALL~~
An ok flash, a familuar audio but over-used it, nice and funny flash though, you should make more soon...

~X~

LaserKarl responds:

Thanks man!
Many nice tips here :)

[bigg nosed man]

((( HAHA )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this was just strange, but i must admitt it was funny, the "CHARACTERS" were funny and they talked funny and made it unique, abit strange though, still nice flash...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe more characters and more depth in detail. the voices were good, but maybe change it up abit ...

~~OVERALL~~
A very strange flash with even more strange audio, but fits in with the odd looking characters...

~X~

[Umbrella: TSE]

((( NEEDS WORK )))

~~REVIEW~~
This startedout to be a neat idea, but with just "JPEGS" and a button repetitve got abit anoying, the music was neat, the game does need work, more understanding of it aswell...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well there are lots of things but the one thing that most bugs me was the "BUTTONS" instead of using butons to proceed to the next msg, just have it flow as a movie, viewers may get anoyed at always having to press the button...

~~OVERALL~~
A simple game but not much effort was put into it, also abit confusing, needs more work...

~X~

[Tom fights the Ninjas]

((( CUTE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was cute, the voice helped with that, the idea of it in B/W was ok but could be worked on, the whole stick style was ok aswell but needs more detail like character like characters and some sorta backrounds, the voicing and story seemed to be the best part and playedout well...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs abit of more detail and effort in the character areas, And while its black and white, you may want to think about adding some color even just a drop here or there, like say a blood drop so that the B&W reflects more it would be a nice touch of little color vs the B&W

~~OVERALL~~
A good idea, but needs more effort and ideas, and color...

~X~