XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Star Wars Episode 0]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was notbad, it was neat, i liked it more for the story then anything else, he animation could be abit sharper though, but it does keep you interested, nice work, hope to see more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Sharper animation, and more detail within characters and backrounds...

~~OVERALL~~
A neat take on starwars, nice flash for all, good story...

~X~

[Hotel Abyss]

((( NOTBAD AT ALL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Loved this, the whole black and white gives it a realistic feel and creepy, this opening scene kinda reminds me of my first episode of ghost motel, anyways i liked this more for the story, and the characters were unique very welldone, could use abit more detail though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More animation like on the "LIMBS" of the characters, and faster animation aswell, like when walking up the stairs...

~~OVERALL~~
A good flash sorta noir but neatly done good story here...

~X~

[Sonic's Upgrade]

((( ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was cool, had a good start to it, kinda starts to lag off in the end though, it was fun though, maybe make it longer or something, animation was decent and sounds were ok, needs more detaail...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some detail, and not just sprites of jpegs but your own designs...

~~OVERALL~~
Another sprite action flash, coulduse abit more detail though, keep up the sprite action...

~X~

[Sonic:ChaosFactor preview]

((( I ENJOYED IT )))

~~REVIEW~~
I enjoyed this one, somewhat entertaining with everything going on, maybe abit more action scenes next time, sonic was funny, more characters would be nice, nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More characters and action scenes, and abit of down sizing, not much moe though...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny sonic flash decen quality i was pleased with it...

~X~

[Hooray! It's Patriot Day!]

((( LIKE THE ART )))

~~REVIEW~~
The art porton of it all was really neat to see, could use some animating though, and maybe some better quality sound, for the mostpart it was nice to see the art and some of the detail but could use more...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better animation, and more quality on music...

~~OVERALL~~
an interesting take on it, interesting stuff though...

~X~

[Myth Madness Trailer]

((( HAHA CUTE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this was cute, very entertaining, the "CHARACTERS" were somewhat plain and bland but they had a certain entrtainmnt valu to thm, ovrall made m laugh and was funny to se, so nice work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More diffrnt charactrs to bring into th flash might help...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny flash with som strange looking charactrs...

~X~

[PTFA Guy Short 6]

((( HAHA )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this made me laugh, not sure if i saw the others but i may look into them, you shouldnt quit now but, make more atleast one more, very funny stuff...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You have the funny down, now just work on the size abit, and a few more episodes...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny stuff cant be missed, nice work indeed...

~X~

Ryan-Smith responds:

Awesome thanks, I'm still making them so don't worry about that.

[mario vs the castle]

((( VRY NTRTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this was vry funny mad m laugh a few tims, the strang scrn size ws odd but ok, i njoyd it, and it was funny with poor mario and his antics hhe, anyways you should make more of these sometime, like a contibuing saga or something, anyways nice work keep it up...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
It seemed abit short so maybe abit longer with more things that mario trys to do to the castle....

~~OVERALL~~
Funny mario parody, abit short though...

~X~

[Madness 1.5]

((( CUTE AND ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well i thought i saw this one before, but it is 1.5, but you should have made a whole new story or something, anyways it was funny made me chuckkle a few times so i was pleased with it, nice work, keep it up...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would have liked to see some animated clouds in the backround or someting...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny madness redone, but still funny...

~X~