XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

["Cosm"]

((( INTERESTING BUT LOOPS )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was interesting flowed very slow and easy very pleasent, it looped over and over, you may want to fix that, explained beloew, it was nice flash kinda slow but thats what was neat about it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You could add a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash...

~~OVERALL~~
Slow and easy, but could be fixed with the looping, also some "SOUND/FX" would be nice...

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[B-Jesus!!]

((( ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Funny and entertaining, made me laugh, it did seem short, but was ok, maybe make a story with some "VOICE-OVERS" it would give it a certain style, nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer, some voices wold help aswell...

~~OVERALL~~
Short but has some humor, needs more to it more story...

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[THEND]

((( ABIT STRANGE )))

~~REVIEW~~
It was abit strange, nice artwork though, love the shading and different effects, lots of effort and detail shown which was a real plus, the song did keep playing after the cartoon endded, might want to look into it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some characters, something besides the house and car...

~~OVERALL~~
Interesting abit strange at first, nice music and art...

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[-FourSteps-]

((( LOTS OF COLOR )))

~~REVIEW~~
This has promise, it ended too short, started out great with all the color and the ok music, just ended so fast, wish it had more going on, nice job though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer,a nd you may want to have some better quality on the sound it was abit scratchy...

~~OVERALL~~
Short but good start, love the use of color kinda artistic...

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M4KBOT responds:

Thanks for the review;
I only made it 30 seconds long because the original advert was 30 seconds long.

[The Mourner]

((( VERY SLOW )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was kinda not that good, i man the "CHARACTERS" were great and lots of detail, but very little animation, it also looped which was not good, might want to work out the bugs on this one...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You could add a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash

~~OVERALL~~
Loops and was very slow needs some work...

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[-cliff-]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Not sure what to say about this but it did give me a chuckle or two hehe, it was really random and the "TOM FULP" head was very funny, seemed abit short though but was still ok i thought...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Hmmm its very random so i would leave it as is or make it even more random...

~~OVERALL~~
Short and random, with an apearance by ton fulp...

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[Funny Cola]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this started out ok and the end well that was not expected but it made me laugh, the "JPEG" images were abit cheesy though anyways nice trick...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well it was meant to be this way so dont know wht there is to improve on...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and unexpected is the right words...

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GreyClock responds:

f...... u......

[HEAT MAN 1]

((( ABIT OLD BUT ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well its been awhile since i seen any flash with heatman but its nice to find this, abit chessy with the "JPEG" explosions, and as for the music it seemed fitting, it was entertaining, thats all i can say...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Hmmm not sure, not even sure if you come here anymore...

~~OVERALL~~
Heatman what more can be said...

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