XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Metal Slug Chicken Dance]

((( CUTE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this one made me laugh, it was cute, and entertaining, the ending with the last dance was the best, i see this more as a music video which it seemed like it was funny...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Since it seemed like a music video add some borders and make it really seem like a music video...

~~OVERALL~~
A sorta music video with a funny dance, the ending is the best part...

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[situation 0: shade]

((( I LIKED IT )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was nice, i liked it, the black and white theme was notbad either, i did find the text could have been better presented though, great song though, it really rn the flash, anyways nice work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a solid bar behind the "TEXT" and make the text abit thicker...

~~OVERALL~~
A good theme flash, and really good song to drive the animation...

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[Sprite Survivor - 7]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well notbad, the idea is good, and with all the differrent sprite characters it makes for a decent flash and idea, i also really liked the smooth look of the sprites, very nice job indeed, hope to see the others soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Much more characters would be nice, and some really survivor chages would be nice...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny sprites and good idea for the flash...

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[Sonic Epoch ep. 5 (1980s)]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well notbad, this was entertaining, funny and gave me a few laughs, wish there was more clips or the ones you had were a tad longer, but overall they were funny, and good presentation with the menu...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Longer clips, and a better looking "BACK TO MENU" button...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny colab of sonic and friends really will make you laugh...

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[Shiny Nails Episode 1]

((( NOTBAD COULD BE LONGER )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad could be longer though, it seemed abit short, and abit slow aswell, the "CHARACTER" and othe stuff like backrounds was notbad though nice color nice facial features and an ok animation, just needs more and a better ending...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more like longer scenes and better conclusion...

~~OVERALL~~
A decent short with good color and detail of character, just needs abit more...

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[Duke episode 01]

((( IT WAS COOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was ool, kinda seemed to go everywhere, needs some sorta balance, as for the art it was very impressive lots of detail from each area i was impressed from start to finish, nice woork, keep it up...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More episodes, it has a certain style to it, so make more if you can...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and nice detail, a decent flash works...

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[Sonic In The City Ep.5]

((( FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
It was funny, i will give you that, but the graphics need work, even in some of the backround and more effects for sure, i did get a few laughs out of it but it needs abit more...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail and depth especialy with the characters...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny sonic flash, needs abit of detailing...

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[endless line to forever]

((( RANDOM BUT UNIQUE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Very impressive detail like in each prop, backround and backround scene, the way you started it was awsome and then turns into color very impressive, i love the shading detail very impressive stuff...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Wow i cant see a single thing maybe abit less randomness but that is just a little...

~~OVERALL~~
Very impressive artwork, lots of detail and shading should be on everyones fave list, nice work...

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[FBF crazy 2!]

((( DECENT )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was decent but could use some backrounds, the white backs seem to put everything out of place, the music was really good and flowed with the smoooth animation, more stuff like other animatins could also be added....

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some backrounds, even a solid color would do something that presents the other animations better...

~~OVERALL~~
A fun FBF could have more effects and backrounds though...

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Murch responds:

Ok, i understand about the backgrounds things, and i will take that into consideration in any other submissions. About the extra anims thing, i dont think that is a good idea cause it would clutter it. Thanks for your constructive critisicsm yet again :D