XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[legend of oval]

((( LOL NEEDS DETAIL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was funny, but the "GRAPHICS" does need work and lots of detail aswell as more effort on character designs, it was funny and simple but needs more effort and depth...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Character designs, more depth, detail and lots of effort...

~~OVERALL~~
Simple and very bland...

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[Daily2oon SE: Aerdail]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad stuff here i actually like it, more then i have liked others from SS, but it has a certain style, it was also neat and has neat animating, so nice job on this one, i hope to see more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Hmmm i like how it is like this...

~~OVERALL~~
A neat flash nice animating...

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[+]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad i love the intro seen it a few times now and its always cool to see it and the nice rain effects and all, also at the start when you say "Go Back in times" shouldnt it be "Go back in time" ??? ohwell it was funny...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
It was fine as is...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny flash and enat intro as always...

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[The Muslim Aristocrats]

((( STRANGE BUT FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
LOL well it was funny, sorta random, could have been better say like some backrounds, subtitles, more quality in voicing, and a more of a plot but i did find the randomness abit funny, all and all it was funny...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
All though the voices were fine, it would have been nice to still have some "SUBTITLES" just for the overall effect of it making it more enjoyble, you also could add some backrounds as the white ones were just to plain, also you may want to think about compressing the file it was abit much...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and random, abit large file for the content...

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MR-HOMO responds:

Great, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Yeah it was a pretty big file size, but I tried compressing it and because so many of the images are just jpg's, they got twisted beyond recognition whenever I tried compressing. So I figured I'd just stick with the current size it's at.

Subtitles are a good idea, I should add them. It's good practice to add them to everything. It was just laziness there.

It was quite random. What can I say? I'm mad.

Thanks for the awesome review, very constructive. If you liked this, check out some of my other stuff.


Thanks

[The Witch Clock: Prelude]

((( INTERESTING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was hard to hear what was said, and second the "TEXT" was very small had to close to look and see what it actually said, the clocks could also use more detail in there design, interesting but needs work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail on the characters, make the sound abit louder, and larger text even some backing behind the text to give it a better look to it...

~~OVERALL~~
Its ok, but need work, and more effort...

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Kyora-Mishiso responds:

Rawr.
Thanks for the review, I guess.

[Bob and Donny]

((( OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well first off it was very short, and after awhile the audio loop gets anoying, also it looped you may want to fix that, and why the stramge view screen??? anyways better luck next time...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
first off make it longer, and I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see, You could add a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash...

~~OVERALL~~
Short and anoying but can be better just takes time, better luck next time...

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[sonic battel thing]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad, i like how sonic was spinning like he does but you gave it a nice viewshot, the other art areas were ok but could use detail to it aswell, more shading and detail, nice song in the backround to give it that sonic game feel...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shading detail and deph like the backrounds and props...

~~OVERALL~~
Neat sonic flash, but needs work on detail and such...

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[Space Jerks : Episode 6]

((( GREAT ANIMATION )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was a good animation, i really liked the character work lots of color and detail then there is the voices very realistic to there look and mouth talking, allthough it would be neat to have some subtitles, anyways great flash i loved it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles...

~~OVERALL~~
A good wellmade flash great voicing and neat characters but most of all it was funny...

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[minimal:playing]

((( HAHA FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was really good stuff the animation was neat, the characters were simple but it was funny kinda reminded me of those old classic kids books, the "PLOT" was funny and cute, i would have left out the blood at the end but it seemed ok still, anyways nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing this is perfect as is...

~~OVERALL~~
Very original animation here abit short but you all will laugh with this one...

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