XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[MToons Weekly Top 001]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Another random one well they all but this was funny especialy the chiken one, i still say add more clips and make them longer if you can, anyways funny stuff this time around, keep it up...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Longer clips, and more clips...

~~OVERALL~~
Random but very funny, you all will laugh with this one...

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[Klondike]

((( LOL FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this was funny, it was abit hard to hear exactly he was saying though, but i did like the flash and the different stuff that was going on, it was funny, more darker and smoother colors would improve on the character...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles, and some smoother colors like for the character...

~~OVERALL~~
A decent flash, kinda funny, abt hard to hear whats being said though...

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[My Roooom!]

((( GREAT SKETCHY LIKE GRAPHICS )))

~~REVIEW~~
This had some nice graphics art work, it was very sketchy like, but made it unique, great voicing aswell, and as for the animation it had some perfect screen views and zooming in shots, very neat and different flash, i like it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More color all around especialy in the backrounds...

~~OVERALL~~
A unique flash, great artwork, and good voicing aswell as some good animating, must be watched by all of newgrounds...

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[Common Sense]

((( FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this was funny, the characters were odd, as for the flash and the theme of the pencil was odd but did give me a luagh or two hehe, you should add some bodies to the teacher nad kids though, funny flash though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some bodies to the characters...

~~OVERALL~~
Odd theme, but funny and odd characters, you all should like it though...

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[Trick 17]

((( IT WAS OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it "LOOPED" which is never fun, you may want to fix that, you did have some nice character, and good flow of animation with the ball, the backrounds were bland but overall it was funny and entertaining...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see, and You could add a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash...

~~OVERALL~~
A very short flash, but loops and seems like it could be better presented with some updates...

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[Jackie Chan's Outtakes!]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
LOL this was funny, the jpeg heads was cute, the stunts, was not bad either, the Report page was funny but could look better, for an older flash it was notbad, kinda neat though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better characters like draw your own heads besides the jpeg heads...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny stunts, kinda neat flash here...

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[Stone Trek: Star Trekkin]

((( HAHA MORE )))

~~REVIEW~~
I didnt think there was anymore, but they do get slightly better but most of all they are funny, and as always great characters just like in startrek very nicely done, props to you on this one, i love this series...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just make more episodes hehe...

~~OVERALL~~
Star trek at its best in years hehe, great toon here, everyone should watch this series...

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[Pongo XI: clay baby die!]

((( HAHA )))

~~REVIEW~~
Now this was good, lego and clay was such a good idea, but it was animated very well very smooth, short but funny as hell, very good flash and idea, hope to see more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just make it abit longer, with more crazy turns and twists when the lego guy drags him...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny idea with lego and clay, and very funny animation...

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