XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[GG - DEFUCKTIVE Collab]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Ok well what can i say here, first off the screen was way to small, the icons to click on were also very small, and as for the content lol it did make me laugh but kinda random and too random for the grounds...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Larger screen size aswell as larger buttons to click on...

~~OVERALL~~
If you like random with jpegs this is the one for you lol...

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[Bouncing pau]

((( CUTE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Lol this was cute, but it looped, that wasent bad but would be better if it ran from the start of a click of a button, but anyways some nice effects in the backrounds like the stars and moon, and sun, and the flow of animation was very smooth, i liked it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a stop action code for the looping, and some sound/fx and or music would be nice...

~~OVERALL~~
Cute and good flowing animation of the main character and nice effects, especialy in the backrounds...

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[Strut Boy 2]

((( I LIKED IT )))

~~REVIEW~~
I liked it, it was entertaining the characters and the car was neat good colors and good designs, as for the story it was funny and was neat, kinda like a music video, it was notbad of a flash...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like it as is, just make more episodes in the future...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny flash with nice use of color...

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[{Dunks}]

((( NEAT )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was a neat idea with the dunks and all, but the time to load up was massive, you may want to bring it down somewhat if you can, but i do like the idea behind it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The Filesize was massive almost killed my machine, i use 56k and im sure alot of other users do aswell and something to think about when making really big flashworks and the filesize is that big think about the user abit as they might not beable to download as some people may be impatient, compress it abit or cut it down somehow but remember that alot of us use 56k...

~~OVERALL~~
Good idea with the camera and dunks but way to big in file...

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[Paint Ball]

((( AWSOME EFFECTS )))

~~REVIEW~~
You presented a nice flash with good presentation, and some awsome effects itw as keeping me interested, the effects mostly, abit short but very entertaining, nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just make it longer with more scenes and such...

~~OVERALL~~
A short flash but with some very impressive effects from characters to animation, nice work...

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[Daily2oon10012005]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Another one of these "RIP" ones heh well while they are funny they are also abit disturbing, but still amusing, and gave me abit of laughing, could use more effort, some details here and there but some stuff was ok...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well where do i start heh...

~~OVERALL~~
Another rip on illwill, funny though...

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[Milano Day - NGC Collab]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was notbad, I recently started watching these flashworks, and they do get better and this one was notbad at all, i was pleased with it, made me laugh actually hehe, anyways nice flash...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I dont know i kinda like it as is...

~~OVERALL~~
Another milano colab, this one was good...

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wesdood responds:

thank you for the wonderful and helpful review.

[Fairly OP Theme Backwards]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this was ok, did make me laugh, and while i didnt understand it at times it was funny, and some ok animations withs ome random moments, all the things that make a decent flash toon....

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More humor, and some smaller filesize would help...

~~OVERALL~~
A big file but you all should get a good laugh out of this one...

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[Star Wars - Duel]

((( IT WAS TOO SHORT )))

~~REVIEW~~
Ha well it was good, but way to short, should have had it play into different scnes and up into places and such, good battle with the sabre though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Longer battle, more scenes, I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see...

~~OVERALL~~
Short battle withe sbares and sticks, not much other then that...

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