XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[HardLove]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Wll i was laughing with this one from the start the guys shorts haha that was great, as for the art it was dcent, but seems as if it could be slightly better, it still was good though very entertaining, i was pleased, keep up the good work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail in the characters and backrounds...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny flash ok art and funny humor you all will love it...

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[ExploStickMotion II]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad animation, allthough it was sticks it was still cool, with some good use of color like the red and blue sticks, it made it standout, you may want to add some real characters though, anyways nice animation...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The stick characters need work, so i would suggest giving them more detail besides the stick themself such as facial features eyes mouth and hair animations, maybe some shoes pants shirts and so on, to make them different then just your avg stuck, it would improve on the character and flash in general...

~~OVERALL~~
A neat stick flash and good action along with nice use of color...

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[Faggotstar - Speed dating]

((( WILD AND CRAZY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok well this was wild and crazy ill give you that much, very random and abit much on some flashing points, but all n all it was amusing and has its entertainment value lol, funny stuff, hope to see more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Less flashing more color...

~~OVERALL~~
A random and wold flash funny stuff...

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[Super Mario Tribute!!]

((( COULD BE BETTER )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat an dstarted out great, i love the old style sprites such as mario, but the "TEXT" was very sloppy should hve been better more depth and some text bubbles, anyways as for the plot it was entertaining...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better text/fonts could help...

~~OVERALL~~
A fun sprite flash, could be better though...

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[In A Nutshell: Part Deux]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was kinda neat with all the strange and odd variations of animations, but it was a very large size, maybe 5 animations would have been better, but as for the flash it was amazing like your style...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You may want to compress the file as it was abit larg and for users with 56k such as myself might have issues with downloading the file, just something to think about when the file gets that big...

~~OVERALL~~
Decent flash of multiple odd flashworks...

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[gayGroup TT #15]

((( SIGH )))

~~REVIEW~~
Sigh this one was abit scary, abit much with the screaching voice and oconjo smile face, hehe it was funny just abit wild and on the crazy side...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Less smile wildness, and more longer clips...

~~OVERALL~~
Sill flash with random wildness...

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[Fag Bodyspray]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well cant say i have seen the actual comercial but as for this animation it was funny, abit odd and strange but funny, made me laugh, file could be compressed better though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some compressing of the file...

~~OVERALL~~
A comercial parody kinda funny...

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[Daily2oon09262005]

((( UM OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
Ok it was entertaining ill give you that, the "MENU" could use some work though and maybe alittle less of the smiles haha, no but really it was funny made me laugh...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Abit of color and detail on the menu...

~~OVERALL~~
Strange and odd, ut funny, you should get a good laugh from it...

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[H2Owned Theme]

((( LOOPS ... ?? )))

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm well the fact it loops kinda ruins it, and there was not much to go with either, there was some color but not much with all that being said it didnt make much sense either

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some more content and , You could add a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash...

~~OVERALL~~
fix the looping and add more content, funny song though...

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