XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Random Stick Jump]

((( OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was way short, you should have added a few more clips of other shorts if it was gonna be that short, it did however have some smooth animating just not enough content to enjoy, buts its ok i supose...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Loner clip, or add it with other short ones...

~~OVERALL~~
Good smooth animating but too short of an animation...

~X~

[Life on the Edge]

((( I LIKE THE IDEA )))

~~REVIEW~~
I liked the idea and what your going for, but it needs more time and effort especialy on the graphics side of it, by adding some detail and little things here and there would improve on this, nice idea though keep at it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More work on the graphics, more detail and effects...

~~OVERALL~~
A neat idea for a flash just lacked time and effort...

~X~

[mf's short shoot_out]

((( VERY SHORT )))

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm well its way short, did you ever think about just adding it as a colab of shorts or something, you did present good graphics, and some good action, just abit short for me...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
To improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see...

~~OVERALL~~
A very short flash but good action, and nice looking car in the backround...

~X~

[Milano Toons 008]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this made me laugh especialy the "CLOWN FACE" hehe there was only "3" clips this time?? anyways they were random but funny, the clips in this one aswell as #4 seem too small, but funny stuff...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Longer clips and more then just 3...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny random and oddness....

~X~

[Milano Toons 004]

((( FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well i have started to review more of these, they are neat, i think on this one, that the "CLIPS" were abit small though, make em a tdad longer next time, funny stuff though and keep up the decent work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Longer clips they were way short...

~~OVERALL~~
Another Milano toons classic...

~X~

[Reaserching Movement 2]

((( ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha it was entertaining for sure, the actual face and the animated one was a good idea and i like how they flow together, very nice, but it was too short, should have done more, the ending credits was fun aswell...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the main part more longer it was just to short...

~~OVERALL~~
A neat face head animation...

~X~

[RagnaroK: Teh pwnzorz]

((( HMMMM )))

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm well it does need some work and i think you know that, just even some detail here and there, just take your time and make it longer with characters that really come alive, also some nice effects and great presentation would make it a find and dandy flash...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More time and effort all the way around...

~~OVERALL~~
An ok flash but needs lots of details and effects...

~X~

[Rain experiment]

((( NICE IDEA )))

~~REVIEW~~
I was impressed with this, the idea behind it is great, and you presented the effects of it very well, kinda neat how you dud it, effects were neat and so was the rest of the flash, nice flash very welldone, nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Hmmm, well not sure it was more of a test then anything else...

~~OVERALL~~
A fun little rain thingy...

~X~

[MAN 1: The Void]

((( MUSIC DIDNT FIT )))

~~REVIEW~~
The music didnt seem to fit the animation, and i alos noticed that the "TEXT" was cutting off into the screen when it gets long wording or something, and it was sorta short, but funny i thought...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Fix the "TEXT" so it doesnt cut off on the ends, aswell as puting a solid color backing to the text so its easier to read...

~~OVERALL~~
A neat muddin / clock flash but needs some re-working...

~X~

Kyora-Mishiso responds:

Yah, I did that overflowing text thing on purpose. YOu're the first one to say something about it.

[All My Love]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
I Like the idea of this and i know exatly what you mean by not being able to finish stuff even short stuff, but anyways onto the flash it was decent, the "ART" was okm but could be improved with abit of details and such, but i do like it, so props to you, keep up the good work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Finishing things hehe...

~~OVERALL~~
A nice and pleasent animation simple butneat stuff here...

~X~

HotCod32 responds:

i did 'finish' it in the end... http://www.newgrounds.com/por tal/view/273773 i'd like to have done it better but i was sick of the thing by the end hehe