XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Space Jerks : Episode 6]

((( GREAT ANIMATION )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was a good animation, i really liked the character work lots of color and detail then there is the voices very realistic to there look and mouth talking, allthough it would be neat to have some subtitles, anyways great flash i loved it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles...

~~OVERALL~~
A good wellmade flash great voicing and neat characters but most of all it was funny...

~X~

[minimal:playing]

((( HAHA FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was really good stuff the animation was neat, the characters were simple but it was funny kinda reminded me of those old classic kids books, the "PLOT" was funny and cute, i would have left out the blood at the end but it seemed ok still, anyways nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing this is perfect as is...

~~OVERALL~~
Very original animation here abit short but you all will laugh with this one...

~X~

[sleeping in ƒire]

((( NEEDS A STOP-ACTION CODE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well as your first its ok but has some issues such as it loops meaning your "RE-PLAY" button doesnt work which also tells me that you need to add a stop actio code in the script, anyways as for the flash it was ok, needs work on the art and animating more detail and more effort...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You could add a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash...

~~OVERALL~~
Abit sloppy, but you get the idea of it, also needs some fixing aswell as better detail...

~X~

[Squibblez - Word]

((( STRANGE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well this one was strange very strange infact, from the music to the simple but poorly made characters, just not sure what to say about this one, something differentnext time...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Hmmm well better detail, some shading and different colors,a nd better fonts...

~~OVERALL~~
Well its strange and poorly made but i supose some liked it...

~X~

[Tardz Wazzup]

((( HAHA )))

~~REVIEW~~
I have not seen one of these "WAZZUP" in a while this was neat though i like the really "LARGE" heads gives it that tardz feel, and the wazzup was neat good sound/fx, i would have liked to see a joke then the wazzup but then again thats just me, anyways funny flash, keep up the funnies...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Hmmm not sure with this one...

~~OVERALL~~
A wazzup classic...

~X~

[Bill and Kev's Exc. Advn.]

((( I LIKE IT )))

~~REVIEW~~
Hey this was notbad has a good feel to it and has some funny humor just like i like, so i was impressed, could use more detail like with characters and even backrounds but its a start, so i hope you do make more of it like in a series, anyways nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Hmmmm make more episodes with more stuff going on...

~~OVERALL~~
A good start to a series, hope to see more soon...

~X~

[Random Stick Jump]

((( OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was way short, you should have added a few more clips of other shorts if it was gonna be that short, it did however have some smooth animating just not enough content to enjoy, buts its ok i supose...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Loner clip, or add it with other short ones...

~~OVERALL~~
Good smooth animating but too short of an animation...

~X~

[Life on the Edge]

((( I LIKE THE IDEA )))

~~REVIEW~~
I liked the idea and what your going for, but it needs more time and effort especialy on the graphics side of it, by adding some detail and little things here and there would improve on this, nice idea though keep at it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More work on the graphics, more detail and effects...

~~OVERALL~~
A neat idea for a flash just lacked time and effort...

~X~

[mf's short shoot_out]

((( VERY SHORT )))

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm well its way short, did you ever think about just adding it as a colab of shorts or something, you did present good graphics, and some good action, just abit short for me...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
To improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see...

~~OVERALL~~
A very short flash but good action, and nice looking car in the backround...

~X~