XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Paul goes hunting]

((( OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was ok just not alot of stuff going on with it, the rabbit was funny, it was just not enough going on, and the menue with the play button it needed something flashy a better look to it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make some better buttons say like something with good color, flashy, and animated, something that makes the whole screen have a good look...

~~OVERALL~~
Interesting kinda bland not much going on with this one...

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[old mutants ep 1]

((( FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was really good, i like the artwork, and it was smooth animation, and it almost reminded me of a music video with the good music and all, it all seemed to flow well i hope you made or plan to make more in this awsome series...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I just want to see more episodes...

~~OVERALL~~
Great animation, awsome idea and great music, loved it...

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[James Bond Depot]

((( THIS WAS OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was ok but you need to compress the file somewhat, well alot actually, it was an interesting clip but just way to large especialy from 56k users such as myself, anyways it was ok...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Lower the filesize...

~~OVERALL~~
It was ok, just needs to be compressed...

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[Milano Toons 003]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Another m toons haha im really starting to enjoy these, very random and just makes me lagh, some of them are really good where it could be longer and stand alone, anyways nice animation once again...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Longer clips...

~~OVERALL~~
Another Millano toons classic funny...

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[Milano Toons 007]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was funny ill admit it gave me a laugh, the ninja turtles was nice you guys seem to go with ninja turtles alot, the simpsons theme was funny my fave infact, anyways funny animations...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add one more making it 4 instead of 3...

~~OVERALL~~
Another m toons classic...

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[minimal:snowing]

((( NEEDS MORE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was ok but it was very bland, needed more, and some color for sure, even a pinch of color woul have been neat, it was short and simple, hope to see more on your work soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well while its black and white, you may want to think about adding some color even just a drop here or there, like say a blood drop so that the B&W reflects more it would be a nice touch of little color vs the B&W... I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see...

~~OVERALL~~
Short but has a neat style to it, still needs more...

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[Life of Blob]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok well that was funny, seemed abit on the short side though, but was funny and put a smile on my face, so i was pleased, maybe abit more color in the backround next time...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More backround color and abit longer next time...

~~OVERALL~~
A cute but entertaining short...

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[Metal Slug Virus 3]

((( MORE SLUGS )))

~~REVIEW~~
Ha these are always cool to see, i still dont like the "BUTTON" for the text, but i supose its fin, the guy running across in the first scene was funny as hell hehe, anyways nice work on the sharp sprites and neat slugs, keep up the good work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have it flow like a movie instead of having to click on the buttons all the time...

~~OVERALL~~
Another metal slug classic...

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[Clam by the bus]

((( CUTE SHORT )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was a cute short, but it also loops you may want to fix that with a stop action code, but as for the animation it was funny good graphics and was very smooth flowing very welldone, just needs to be longer and have a preloader or something...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see... You could add a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash...

~~OVERALL~~
Short very short infact but neat graphics and such...

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[Clock Topics]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well notbad, it was neat actually lots of good artwork in this i especialy love the "SBC MUSHROOM" anyways good smooth flash very neat you should make more of these if you can...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just make more episodes sometimes...

~~OVERALL~~
Nice clocks and good detail, also its funny...

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