XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[H2Owned Theme]

((( LOOPS ... ?? )))

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm well the fact it loops kinda ruins it, and there was not much to go with either, there was some color but not much with all that being said it didnt make much sense either

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some more content and , You could add a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash...

~~OVERALL~~
fix the looping and add more content, funny song though...

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[On The Moon (episode 1)]

((( ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Really great character designs, smooth colors and great personalities, and the "VOICES" was great tocuh to the perfect characters, and this flash was funny made me laugh somewhat, nice job, hope to see more...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More characters would be nice...

~~OVERALL~~
Awsome characters good humor, sorta like sponge bob lol...

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[Spoof on Religion - Apple]

((( FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
First off good voicing but you still might want to add some "SUBTITLEs" just because he was talking so fast, als the white backs for the backrounds were not good some color backthere would have been nice, anyways it was a funny flash i enjoyed it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well add some backrounds or backround color... Also, All though the voices were fine, it would have been nice to still have some "SUBTITLES" just for the overall effect of it making it more enjoyble...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny guy talking fast its funny but needs more...

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[Gladys and the Moon]

((( VERY ARTISTIC )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was very artistic, especialy with the mellow feel and easy artwork and all the colors was great differrnt style art sorta like paintings made it artsitic, nice job indeed...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would leave it as is...

~~OVERALL~~
An artsitic flash simple and funny, great color use...

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[Dr. WeedMiester ep.1]

((( NEEDS MORE TO IT )))

~~REVIEW~~
It needs more props to it, and also a larger "VIEW SCREEN" the screen was just abit small hard to see everything, the "GRAPHICS" was cool as to making an ok character, needs more work though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More props, some backround music, and a larger view screen...

~~OVERALL~~
Fun little game but could have more to it...

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[//daredevil david//]

((( HAHA FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this was funny, the animation was actually was good nice and decent artwork, as for the story it was neat could have had more at the ending but it was neat stuff...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make a better ending with more result of what happened...

~~OVERALL~~
A fire of a flash hehe great ending...

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[Super Poo Vs. Satan]

((( NEEDS WORK )))

~~REVIEW~~
First off i would lose the buttons, second add some sound/fx, and more detail on the characters and backrounds, funny but needs better detail, and effort...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Instead of using butons to proceed to the next msg, just have it flow as a movie, viewers may get anoyed at always having to press the button...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny but needs work, like buttons and graphics...

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[minimal:boring]

((( AGAIN HEHE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Ha ok just when i thought it was all over there is more this one was notbad, abit better then the last one i saw, i still think you need new ideas they seem very repetitive but still there ok...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
New ideas...

~~OVERALL~~
Another in the series...

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[Interviewing Celebrities]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Ha this was good, the audio was perfect, as for the character design, notbad art work could look abit better like there counterparts though, anyways nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More celebs would be cool, aswell as some subtitles...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny idea, neat characters and funny audio...

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