XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[FF Macbeth]

((( COILD BE BETTER )))

~~REVIEW~~
Decent sprite flash seems to go abit slow, but there was some good action at times there was very little sound/fx, and while there was Text bubbles this could have been much better with some voice dialog of the characters it would be much better then just having to read a bunch of stuff...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add some voices, and some effects aswell as speeding the animation and story...

~~OVERALL~~
A decent animation with sprites abit slow though...

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[)Enemies(]

((( NEAT )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was neat, you sticks wre ok but need some detail to them so they are not like every other stick flash that comes through the portal, but other then that the flash short was entertaining and funny...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The stick characters need work, so i would suggest giving them more detail besides the stick themself such as facial features eyes mouth and hair animations, maybe some shoes pants shirts and so on, to make them different then just your avg stuck, it would improve on the character and flash in general...

~~OVERALL~~
Besides the shortness and the plain sticks it was cool, some good gun effcts helped it along, anyways nice job, hope to see more sometime...

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[Message In A Bottle]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Kinda neat, seems like you took a few ideas from that movie with tom hanks hehe, and the socor ball wilsen hehe, decent artwork good animation, and nice use of colr and such, very entertaining, i could see this as a series of his adventures on the island and such...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more episodes...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny animation, almost a parody of that on emovie...

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[gost012]

((( ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Ha it was entertaining ill give you that, the different clips were random and funny, but i supose thats the way they are supose to be, funny and entertaining i thought...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More story like flash would be neat...

~~OVERALL~~
A few random clips colab like flash...

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[MDay : The Emo Collab]

((( HAHA PERFECT )))

~~REVIEW~~
I know someone who this would be perfect for haha, anyways this one was a good idea and hope all the emo's out there liked it cause it was perfect hehe, the song was great, just perfect for the flash aswell...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Lower the file abit...

~~OVERALL~~
Emo-ness at its best...

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[01: Little Fat Mouse]

((( DECENT )))

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad, kinda neat actually, good detail, nice graphics, and is funny from start to finish, my only issue was the filesize, that was abit large, but still good stuff...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just the filesize as it was abit much...

~~OVERALL~~
Big file but some funny stuff with tis animation...

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[Cold as Ice ep. 05]

((( DECENT )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was ok, but could be better. like more effects, and more action, but it did presemt that stuff just needs more in my opinion, good story plot though i liked it, hope to see more sometime...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Lower the size, it was just way to big, especialy since i and many others have 56k, its a proven study that 50% of net users still use dial-up so just think about that when making a flash next time...

~~OVERALL~~
Good flash, could use some compressing though...

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Rule responds:

Thanks a bunch. Since this is one of my old, I'll look into it, and see what I don't need, to make it smaller.

[America!!]

((( NEEDS WORK )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well could be abit better with some more detail, some little compressing of the file would help also, but most of all more detail and effects would help improve on this flash most of all,..

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail, some compressing, and more ideas around it...

~~OVERALL~~
Interesting but needs work...

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