XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bob, the Fish]

((( NEEDS WORK )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was ok but needs work, for one it loops, an dthe sound if any was very low could barely hear it, you have a good idea here with the fish but just needs more to it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer, add more scenes, and You could add a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash, also needs better "SOUND" quality...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny idea for a flash good character, but needs more effort...

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[Mario's Chase]

((( FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
I liked this not just because i grew up on mario games but it had some good random ideas like from the classic games, but it was also very smooth and made me laugh, anyways nice job, hope to see more sometime...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More characters from the game besides just the ones you had...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny classic and even more funny, cant go wrong with mario...

~X~

[48 Hours Goodbye]

((( HMMM )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well not sure what to say on this it was very short and was really hard to understand what was being said, maybe add some subtitles or something, more content would also help...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
It was abit hard to understand what was being said by the characters, so i would suggest adding some "SUBTITLES" to know exactly what the dialog is, it will improve on the flash...

~~OVERALL~~
Short and hard to understand but then again so are most clock flash's haha...

~X~

[BOunCe ep 1]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad this was ok, the characters need more detail though, but it was funy "BOUNCE" hehe no really good and smooth and i enjoyed it, but work abit of the characters...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The sticks need detaling more like characters...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and smooth animation,,,

~X~

[Street Fighter:TUS Part 3]

((( KINDA NEAT )))

~~REVIEW~~
Ha this was cool, some nice backrounds, some good battle scene, why not to improve on this have the guys move into other scenes and backround, besides just the one, anyways it was a good battle...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More backrounds...

~~OVERALL~~
Fun battle scenes sharp animation neat sprites, and good action, keep up the great work...

~X~

[Six Shooter 004]

((( NEEDS MORE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Lol well it was funny but still needs more, not so simple but more depth of the story an less "JPEGS" would be nice, but if its gonna be this short add it to a multiple flash thing or something...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more toons to this or make this one much longer with more depth and more characters to it...

~~OVERALL~~

~X~

[Strike Flyers - Episode 3]

((( FUNNY AND ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Ha this was funny, i must say you did have some ok art like interesting characters, aswell as a good plot for the story, and nice different scenes, it was an entertaining flash i really liked it, nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe add some subtitles when the people are talking especialy at the start...

~~OVERALL~~
Good story with lots to see, a nice and decent animation...

~X~

[(Old) Pokemon Quest: SE]

((( ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Ha this made me laugh and was entertaining, the sprites were ok, but could be sharper looking, it had some ok hunor to it, and i enjoyed it just abit bland for me, anyways nice job, keep up the good work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Hmm not sure, more variaty of characters might help, and better text bubbles...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and entertaining, nice work on this one...

~X~

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[The Futurama Collab]

((( INTERESTING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was ok, allthough there could have been abit more effort that went into it such as art detail and effects, but for the mostpart it did make me laugh, anyways hope to see more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better graphics and detail...

~~OVERALL~~
Nice idea but needs more effort on the graphics area...

~X~

[two brothers]

((( NEAT AND ARTISTIC )))

~~REVIEW~~
I like this for a number of things but it did remind me and give me that whole artistic feel which was cool, the "ANIMATION" was very snooth just all flowed well together, o very nice work on this...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a pince of color here and there just for an overall effect of it all...

~~OVERALL~~
Artistic, pleasent and neat animation...

~X~