XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[111 - Gosford Park 2]

((( DECENT )))

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad, it was decent, i like what you did with the "SKETCHY" like art like in the backrounds, the flash itself was abit short, could have gone on abit more telling more about the soup can, anyways nice flash...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Longer and more scenes aswell as more info on the main soup guy...

~~OVERALL~~
Short and odd lock flash but arnt they all...

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[Mario VS Megaman]

((( HA FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was way short but made me laugh, poor megaman, as he was floating away, would have been neat if you had some voices for mario and sonic, but it was a funny flash, so keep up the good work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer, and more scenes...

~~OVERALL~~
A short megaman vs mario...

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[Skittles N' Bitz 5]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Cant say that i have seen the others but ill be sure to check them out, but as for this one it was cool, funny and did make me laugh hehe, the animating was decent and tehrew as alot to see, which really made i an enjoyble flash, so keep up the good work and and hope to see more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not sure but everything seemed fine...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and entertaining, nice animation...

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[Megaman: Robot Masters]

((( NEAT ANIMATION )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat, im not much of a fan of "SPRITES" but it was entertaining, lots of good action and some decent effects allthough could use more effects, and even more characters,, anyways good animation, i liked it, keep up the good work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More dazzling effcts and more characters from the megaman gener...

~~OVERALL~~
Megaman at his best hehe...

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[Good Vs. Evil]

((( CUTE CHARACTERS NEAT MUSIC )))

~~REVIEW~~
Odd characters, and you had a nice "INTRO" to the movie, allthough you could add some bodies hehe, as for the animating it seemed ok, i thought it was funny and had good humor to it, nice "MUSIC" some voice-overs might have been a better choice though, or have the music change, anyways good flick, keep it up...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well it seemed like a "TRAILER" so make it more like a movie or have some plot to it, even if its a trailer it still needs more then that...

~~OVERALL~~
Odd looking characters with stick bodies, kinda like a short trailer...

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Rudy responds:

I understand. This is very old work of mine, I got more instore for the future.

I'm probably not gonna finish this series anyway.

Thanks for your review.

[FWA - Squirrel]

((( FUNNY SHORT )))

~~REVIEW~~
Hshs ok well while that was short i was very funny, and some very smooth animation, the characters were very small, but i guess they have to be, i would think about making the flash abit longer, maybe even more scenes and such, anyways nice job, keep it up...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer and more scenes, or I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see...

~~OVERALL~~
A short short, but very funny and entertaining, could use more scenes though...

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TheDevilMyself responds:

Thank you for your critique! It was right on. I wish i could go back and fix things, but due to a hard drive crash the original project file was lost. I've started toying around with more animating and am definitely keeping in mind the length of the projects i am working on. As i mentioned, the squirrel project was my first foray into the world of flash animation and lo, it will not be the last.

I'll be back.

Multiple shorts probably would have been the end fate of this project were it to have continued - hell you never know it may still - there was a whole storyline i was working out in my head involving some sort of rivalry between birds and squirrels - seems almost childish now, but it would be fun!

Again, thanks for the in depth critique of my poor little short! Keep up the good work!

D

[Fat, Dumb n' Happy]

((( FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was funny, the "VOICES" were abit hard to understand at times but it was ok, the characters looks well amde and were funny, nice scenes but you should have presented some more scenes, i enjoyed the flash...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles...

~~OVERALL~~
A decent flash wellmade characters, funny humor and very entertaining...

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RSQViper responds:

Well, it was my first movie so based on that I think it's really good.

Thanks for the input, but as far as subtitles go, I may or may not ever use them. It would really depend on the movie itself, I guess.

You should check out my other stuff if you enjoyed this. My animation and graphics have improved greatly.

[The Megaman Collab]

((( AWSOME )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was awsome, as always i enjoy the sharp and very smooth sprites and animation always from start to finish and great action at that, very welldone, just keep an eye on that filesize if you can...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Filesize...

~~OVERALL~~
Great sharp sprites, lots of action intense effects...

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