XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Colours De Rainbow]

((( NEAT )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat, could have had something besides just sticks but the animationw as really smooth and the music was notbad seemed to fit perfectly with the fast animation...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better character designs...

~~OVERALL~~
Fast paced, good music and neat animation...

~X~

[zaaasfd IV: hellspawn]

((( OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
OK this was so-so seems abit sloppy like in the art portion the glocks could use more detail and effort some shading to start off with, and better understanding of what there saying, then it could be funnier somewhat...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More humor but most of all more effort in the design of the characters...

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining yet odd and starnge, but you may get a laugh out of it...

~X~

[Marica Tu - Numa Chicken]

((( OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well didnt understand much of it but the visuals were ok kinda neat actually, could use more details and more effort in animation, anyways nice try...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some little effects in the backrounds, and some compression...

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining and confusing at the sametime...

~X~

[Spriting tutorial]

((( NOTBAD BUT COULD BE IMPROVED )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was notbad, kinda neat, but it was abit sloppy like with the design of it, and also maybe its me but i didnt hear any music or sound/fx which would have made it more enjoyble...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some sound/fx and or music...

~~OVERALL~~
A decent sprite tutorial...

~X~

[Black box Of Death]

((( GOOD ANIMATION )))

~~REVIEW~~
Kinda like a music videeo, i like how it all formed together but you had some nice music to go with, and the scene selection was decent and a nice idea, it was an ok music flash, make more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Smoother animation would be a start...

~~OVERALL~~
Nice music good animation, kinda like a music video...

~X~

[The Unluckiest Blob]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well notbad but seemed abit short, i do like teh extras but it wasent much more, the stick was ok and funny as was the flash but it needs more content...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The stick characters need work, so i would suggest giving them more detail besides the stick themself such as facial features eyes mouth and hair animations, maybe some shoes pants shirts and so on, to make them different then just your avg stuck, it would improve on the character and flash in general... Since it was so "SHORT" I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny but too short...

~X~

[Who is shrek]

((( INTERESTING )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was interesting kinda confusing at first but got better as it went on, you may want to compress in some parts as it was abit long, anyways nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some compression would be a start...

~~OVERALL~~
Interesting flash but abit confusing at times...

~X~

[Manganese]

((( IT WAS OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
It was ok, kinda funny and silly, i would suggest some sorta backrounds besides the white ones you do have, but i did however like the audio it was perfect, anyways nice job keep it up...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs some sorta backrounds, Add some backrounds besides the plain white one you have, or atleast a base color so that it doesnt look so bland...

~~OVERALL~~
Silly and funny but lacks backround...

~X~

[Ichigo, Nigo, Neko! v2]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
LOL haha this was funny, very random and too much "JPEGS" imo, but it did make me chuckkle abit so i was ok, and the music was entertaining, anyways notbad, hope to see more wacky stuff soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some subtitles of the song but it was fine...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny music video kinda flash...

~X~

[R&FMV - Floor!]

((( FUNNY VIDEO )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was very neat, kinda like a music video but it presented some very good art and even better animation, and as for the "MUSIC" it was very fast and hip really made for a neat flash, nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some subtitles thoughout the flash as the song is really fast...

~~OVERALL~~
Fast video good music, and even better art...

~X~

stoners-lunchbox responds:

I'm flattered. I might have to make a full version of this music video. I can only imagine the kind of success it'll get.

Thanks for watching!