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[Generic Stick Fight]

((( HAHA MADE ME LAUGH )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this was funny, made me laugh infact, anyways it did not last long so you should probably add more content and such, and do something with the "STICKS" they could use more detail especialy in the face area, anyways nice short...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better character detail add eyes a nose some hair...

~~OVERALL~~
Interesting sjort could be longer and some more detail is needed...

~X~

[The Hater]

((( INTERESTING )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was interesting, but seemed to still lag and this is the onlything i was watching, so you may want to look iinto that, it could be due to the massive filesize, so maybe at the sametime reduce the size, it was kinda interesting though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Reduce the filesize somewhat...

~~OVERALL~~
A very large file that needs some compression...

~X~

[The Dragonslayer]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok that was funnt but abit much on the credits but it was funny, just didnt like sitting there then seeing the well you know haha, thanks for some funny entertainment...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Less credits...

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining but too much credits...

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[The Gerbil Cage 1]

((( FUNNY ANIMATION AND NICE GRAPHICS )))

~~REVIEW~~
Hey now this was good, especialy the graphics, allthough some more animation would have been cool, it was funny so i like the humor, and i could see this as a series where the gerbil talks about his owner from the cage and all, anyways funny stuff...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more scenes, like maybe he escapes, Voices are decent but Why not add some "SUBTITLES" just because it will improve on the flash
and like in "DVD" movies you see them, and would just make it better because of people sometimes not always hearing everything clearly...

~~OVERALL~~
Great character good humor. this one has promise, keep up the good flashwork...

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AidenOMG responds:

Thankies for the feedback. On my next project I'll use subtitles, it's a smart idea. =)

[Pooky]

((( WELL NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well its notbad but it could be improved, i think just little things here and there would help improve, like more time with backrounds and more, details alla round, but it does have promise so stick with it and keep at it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail like explained above...

~~OVERALL~~
Decent animation could be improved in some areas...

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[Mario's Adventure Part I]

((( INTERESTING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was interesting, kinda odd but neat, there was some crazy stuff with this but i liked it like that, if im going to suggest anything it would be to lower the filesize somewhat, anyways notbad...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Reduce the file size so that it doesnt take loads of time to download, look for areas to compress, maybe the intense graphics or the audio needs to be cut, but whatever the case try and compress it...

~~OVERALL~~
Interesting and strange at the sametime, needs some reduction in size though...

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Stryden-Kamal responds:

thanks man, this was one of my first flashes so i didnt know how to properly compress it. but im going to start working on flash again soon so it will be better next time.

[STICKMANIA]

((( VERY NICE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was very nice work, allthough they are sticks and im not too fond of sticks, this was still impressive, good action, good fight scenes and awsome effects, onlything i could possibly say would to add some face features to your sticks, other then that it was great stuff...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The stick characters need work, so i would suggest giving them more detail besides the stick themself such as facial features eyes mouth and hair animations, maybe some shoes pants shirts and so on, to make them different then just your avg stick, it would improve on the character and the flash in general...

~~OVERALL~~
A decent stick battle with some nice backround effects, nice animation...

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[Jerk 'N Bedn 01]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this was funny, you should have added more though it started then eded so fast, this has promise, anything with bdn has promise, but anyways make them fight or something...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more content like a fight scenes or something...

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining bedn and some character lol...

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Evil-Kat responds:

Haha, that would be funny. :P

But I don't think there will be a secual. ;)