XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mario's Coin]

(( FUN GAME ))

~~REVIEW~~
The game was fun, abit hard on the "CONTROLS" but it was fun, i like the sword option, and the fire option was kinda neat aswell, overall i really had fun with this game, anyways good work, hope to see some new stuff soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make better controls as these were abit tricky, anyways nice game...

~~OVERALL~~
Fun game, abit tricky at times but it was fun...

~X~

[LL - Phobias]

(( DECENT ANIMATION ))

~~REVIEW~~
The animation was notbad, but it does need to be compressed, for the liitle content it was it, was a long download, but its notbad, i really liked it, just add more and try and compress...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Compress the file...

~~OVERALL~~
Amusing and entertaining, but can be improved on...

~X~

[Just A Simple Life- Part1]

((( VERY NEAT ART STYLE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, i like the characters they presented a neat style of effort and design that i wouldnt normaly see in awhile, only thing i could suggest is make the voices loder or even add some subtitles, but its a good flash toon, keep up the good work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Louder voices and or some subtitles...

~~OVERALL~~
Neat characters and art style, could be slightly improved on though...

~X~

[Po-po Ninja]

((( I LIKED IT )))

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad i liked it, the characters are cool, and there was some nice action but on the other hand it also seemed abit slow, so my opinion would be to speed up the animation or the action, give it some good music aswell, anyways nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Speed up the animation, and add some music...

~~OVERALL~~
Good action, needs abit more though...

~X~

[Generic Stick Fight]

((( HAHA MADE ME LAUGH )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this was funny, made me laugh infact, anyways it did not last long so you should probably add more content and such, and do something with the "STICKS" they could use more detail especialy in the face area, anyways nice short...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better character detail add eyes a nose some hair...

~~OVERALL~~
Interesting sjort could be longer and some more detail is needed...

~X~

[The Hater]

((( INTERESTING )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was interesting, but seemed to still lag and this is the onlything i was watching, so you may want to look iinto that, it could be due to the massive filesize, so maybe at the sametime reduce the size, it was kinda interesting though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Reduce the filesize somewhat...

~~OVERALL~~
A very large file that needs some compression...

~X~

[The Dragonslayer]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok that was funnt but abit much on the credits but it was funny, just didnt like sitting there then seeing the well you know haha, thanks for some funny entertainment...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Less credits...

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining but too much credits...

~X~

[The Gerbil Cage 1]

((( FUNNY ANIMATION AND NICE GRAPHICS )))

~~REVIEW~~
Hey now this was good, especialy the graphics, allthough some more animation would have been cool, it was funny so i like the humor, and i could see this as a series where the gerbil talks about his owner from the cage and all, anyways funny stuff...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more scenes, like maybe he escapes, Voices are decent but Why not add some "SUBTITLES" just because it will improve on the flash
and like in "DVD" movies you see them, and would just make it better because of people sometimes not always hearing everything clearly...

~~OVERALL~~
Great character good humor. this one has promise, keep up the good flashwork...

~X~

AidenOMG responds:

Thankies for the feedback. On my next project I'll use subtitles, it's a smart idea. =)