XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Richard, a portrait]

((( MADE ME LAUGH )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this made me laugh, but something i tell alot of authers would be to lower the filesize, this was bit but entertaining and i like the plot, could use improved art work though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better detail and graphics, but mostly could use some compressing...

~~OVERALL~~
A neat story will make you laugh abit, nice animation...

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[BB - Shorts Collab One]

((( INTERESTING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha im laughing because of the title an interesting name chice you had there, but anyways this was a neat flash i did think the "MUSIC" was interesting not my taste but still interesting so nice work there aswell as an entertaining flash, hope to see more sometime...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More music choices would be neat...

~~OVERALL~~
An interesting flash almost liek a music video...

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[Bomberman: Unprovoked]

((( HAHA COOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was cool, i really liked it, i like it because the colors were really good and bright aswell making it very fresh looking, the animationw as decent had some funny moments, the onlything i didnt like about it was the whole large file which should be something to work on...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Something i always tell large file authers Lower the size, it was just way to big, especialy since i and many others have 56k, its a proven study that 50% of net users still use dial-up so just think about that when making a flash next time...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and good use of color, neat character with some neat action throughout the flash, very entertaining...

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[Damn You, Mr. Ladyboy!!]

((( LOL FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this made me laugh, it has some good art work and i like how you animated the mouths but nothing else, but i do think it was too short, you should add more and explain why he is yealling, nice graphics though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More scenes and much more animating...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny characters but the animation is abit short...

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LuckyLollipopLad responds:

Glad it made you chuckle.

This animated series is based on a series of short comics I drew whilst Mr. Ladyboy did his 168-hour comic. Basically, all the pictures remained the same (though I kept redrawing it, each time with different materials) and I just changed the text in the first two panels.

This is basically an extension of that - I'll keep it the same length, just experimenting with using different styles and changing the lines in the first two 'scenes'.

Really, if it made you chuckle, I consider it job done. This series won't get longer - it's like an exercise in working within constraints.

Thanks for the review!

[A Clown a Wall and a Ball]

((( ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was entertaining, i like the clown and all but he needs more of a body then just the head, but as for the flash it was entertaining made me chuckle abit so notbad at all, i would like to see more clown adventures...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more detail to the clown like a more visual body...

~~OVERALL~~
A clown with a silent file theme, kinda funny...

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[Russian Snipers Hax REDUX]

((( HAHA CRAZY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was short and confusing but was funny as hell, the "VOICE" was strange and dint understand what was going on, but i must admit that it was funny and wacky...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer and with more content...

~~OVERALL~~
Strange and neat lttle flash here...

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ampersandman responds:

:D

Thanks for the review.

Basically, in the scene, one of the russians held out a helmet to make it look like a viable target.

I made the voice of the sniper like a 12 year old's and his dialog reflects it when he starts complaining about the "server's registry sucking" in real life.

[Patrick get killed]

((( HAHA FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was funny, made me chuckle there at the end, it was so fast though went by so fast like in a few seconds, so maybe add more to it and slow it down abit, have the characters have a sorta convo first before the impact, anyways nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Since it was so "SHORT" I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see...

~~OVERALL~~
If you you like spongebob you will get a kick out of this...

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[Love on the Moon]

((( VERY SHORT )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was very short but i guess it was more for the poem or msg, i did like the graphics like of the moon and clouds in a circle, but you should improve on it by adding more content and more animation...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more content and more animation, with more scenes besides just the one you had...

~~OVERALL~~
Very short but the romantic poem was nice...

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