XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[CD06 - Zps Late.]

((( LOL FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this was funny, made me laugh, you should add a preloader and propper buttons as it seems to loop over and over, but it was entertaining especialy with the game music, anyways notbad but could use some work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
needs some work, You could add a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and random but entertaining...

~X~

ZombiePanda responds:

Sorry, it was just a quick throw in for the clock day time of year. I rather enjoyed making this short, and I know to do the Stop; command, but this was I believe my second flash, and didnt quite know how to do that kind of jazz quite yet.

Oh, and thank you for the review.

[helo,,,]

((( CUTE AND FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was cute and funny, there is notmuch to it but it is funny especialy the dancing picacho, the music is notbad either, its just one of those funny and silly little flash's. nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it abit more random if youo can...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and random kinda flash...

~X~

[-Apple- 4]

((( HAHA )))

~~REVIEW~~
This one was abit short but still funny i thought for a min there that you were totaly gonna mess with the nice pleasent feel and turn it to all madness which would have killed it but you should have added more to the other pleasent part, still a neat episode, but so far #3 is still my fave, onto the next...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer, more so with the second half...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny episode in the series...

~X~

[-Apple- 2]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Ok notbad but it sorta started without any buttons, you may want to add some later, but i nust admit you presented this with good backrounds, and good music, it was jamming...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more scenes in this one...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and entertaining for the 2nd needs more scenes though...

~X~

[-Apple- 3]

((( VERY GOOD )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was funny, it has to be the best of the series ill have to see the others to decide that, but anyways, great animation, very well on the story and the music was funny and really flowed to the animation, anyways nice work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the apple and knife talk...

~~OVERALL~~
The best of the series so-far...

~X~

Pixl responds:

Thanks for all of the awesome reviews, cool that you reviewed them all :)

I'm glad you liked this one :)
Not sure about this add voices thing though, in that case I would have to get voice actors cause my own voice would just ruin it. I'm swedish and it would kinda suck if all of the characters had a silly swedish accent, haha :)

Thx again for all the reviews, I will take everything you've said into consideration.

[-Apple-]

((( CUTE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was cute, i just found the series by random but i plan to review them all today, but anyways as this first one it was funny the apple looks alot like a tomato, but it is an entertaining flash kinda neat actually, anyways cute flash im off to the next one...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More apples would be nice...

~~OVERALL~~
Cute character and neat start to a good quality series nice job...

~X~

[SENSEI MAN!!!!!!!11112352]

((( LOL OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok well as soon as i got into the good animation and neatt artwork, but then when it got to the "STICK scene with some scratchy work it was kinda uneasy but i guess its still funny and did make me laugh, anyways notbad but wish it was all good like at the start...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More color not just at the start but throughout the flash...

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining and a mixture f old stick style and quality art style...

~X~

[Hasbro Armageddon]

((( VERY NICE EFFECTS )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was very good, i especialy like the "EFFECTS" such as the spinning and the sun like star in the backround, it was all a good flash and good robot like fighters, a really good action scene, nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it abit longer if you can, and more scenes, maybe even some talking from the characters...

~~OVERALL~~
Great effects, neat characters and awsome scenes a very good flash hope to see a full version sometime...

~X~

[Video Gamerz -Episode 2-]

((( NICE GRAPHICS )))

~~REVIEW~~
Great flash, i especialy like the characters really good design, but anyways as for the rest it was really good some very smooth animation, and on top of that it was sorta funny, nice job hope to see more...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would just think of ways to compress...

~~OVERALL~~
Good flash lots of great graphics and neat animation...

~X~

ScottFalco responds:

Thank you! And yes I know, the filesize is a pain in the ass, its cuz of the sound. But I think I fixed that. If I did, the next vg will be w opping 12 minutes long :O

[Not a Fairy Tale 01]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was funny, kinda random, and the voice was entertaining, could use abit more emotion in it but it seemed to work ok with the randomness of the flash and all, anyways decent short...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer with more content, even some new characters aswell...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and random and some funny voicing...

~X~