XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pooky]

((( WELL NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well its notbad but it could be improved, i think just little things here and there would help improve, like more time with backrounds and more, details alla round, but it does have promise so stick with it and keep at it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail like explained above...

~~OVERALL~~
Decent animation could be improved in some areas...

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[Mario's Adventure Part I]

((( INTERESTING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was interesting, kinda odd but neat, there was some crazy stuff with this but i liked it like that, if im going to suggest anything it would be to lower the filesize somewhat, anyways notbad...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Reduce the file size so that it doesnt take loads of time to download, look for areas to compress, maybe the intense graphics or the audio needs to be cut, but whatever the case try and compress it...

~~OVERALL~~
Interesting and strange at the sametime, needs some reduction in size though...

~X~

Stryden-Kamal responds:

thanks man, this was one of my first flashes so i didnt know how to properly compress it. but im going to start working on flash again soon so it will be better next time.

[STICKMANIA]

((( VERY NICE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was very nice work, allthough they are sticks and im not too fond of sticks, this was still impressive, good action, good fight scenes and awsome effects, onlything i could possibly say would to add some face features to your sticks, other then that it was great stuff...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The stick characters need work, so i would suggest giving them more detail besides the stick themself such as facial features eyes mouth and hair animations, maybe some shoes pants shirts and so on, to make them different then just your avg stick, it would improve on the character and the flash in general...

~~OVERALL~~
A decent stick battle with some nice backround effects, nice animation...

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[Jerk 'N Bedn 01]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this was funny, you should have added more though it started then eded so fast, this has promise, anything with bdn has promise, but anyways make them fight or something...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more content like a fight scenes or something...

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining bedn and some character lol...

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Evil-Kat responds:

Haha, that would be funny. :P

But I don't think there will be a secual. ;)

[-Ghost Hunter-]

((( COULD BE IMPROVED )))

~~REVIEW~~
This is notbad, but could use some improving such as the menu screen and its buttob=ns, they are abit bland and could use color, aswell as some refining of the characters, also make the scenes longer, other then that its notbad...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
An improved menu, and some details on the characters...

~~OVERALL~~
Confusing atfirst but kinda neat after you see it...

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[Sonic: AWAE trailer 1.2-t]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, kinda funny, the animation was notbad and decent for your first as you say, but i liked it, could be more smooth in some areas but it was ok, as for the content notbad i liked it, but overall a decent animation, keep up the good work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Smother animation here and there wouldnt hurt...

~~OVERALL~~
A sonic themed flash somewhat funny...

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[Diceman and Cluppo 2]

((( FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
I saw one of your other claymations and i was very impressed, but they are very short, you should make them longer or add them together or something, great clay-mations though, anyways nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just make them longer...

~~OVERALL~~
Great clay animation but very short...

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Zombie-clock-monkey responds:

Thanks, I'm working on somthing different now with voices and sets, it will be much longer.

[Book-Man Episode 1]

((( LOL FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
LOL well it was funnt and gave me a chuckle, so notbad there, the artwork could use more work though, it was funny in its a silly kinda flash even the voices were funny...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe different voices so that all the people sound different...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and silly animation, could be improved...

~X~