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~~REVIEW~~
Lol that was entertaining, you gave it a comic style with a modern humor base, which was funnt, i did think the text formed kinda slow, and the buttons were ok but might flow better without the buttons...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
why not just let it flow like a movie instead of the buttons? and try and speed up the text in the bubbles...
~~OVERALL~~
This was neat, but seemed to run abit slow and could use abit of updating...
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