XwaynecoltX's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[doors]

This was ok

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was an ok game kinda funny the windows theme was neat, i liked it. maybe improved visuals next time.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some new visuals and such would be a nice touch the ones you had there could be improved much more detail is needed in my opinion

~~OVERALL~~
A funny and neat idea even as old as the idea is but still entertaining

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[Virtual Bubble Wrap]

It was ok

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was a silly little game, i thought there could be better use of color but it was alright, so work on my ideas that brings the game more alive and all, its entertaining stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Color was lacking so i suggest you put more in and all over the place

~~OVERALL~~
A silly game but its alright, i had fun playing this one

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[Get A Life !]

could be improved in graphics

~~REVIEW~~
This was entertaining little game here, fun and random at times but could also have some improved graphics and art design

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
work on the graphics and art design, little detail here and there would be a start

~~OVERALL~~
it was ok just needs improved artwork

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[Hamilton AM Skater]

Not a bad game here

~~REVIEW~~
Wow this was good kinda like those real simulators i have seen, seemed abit short, you should add more props. and more stuff to see and do, give it a city feel.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more props like more trees make it look like a real city, other city related stuff aswell

~~OVERALL~~
A decent game but needs some more new stuff like i said above.

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[Kavo goes to the Factory]

differant

~~REVIEW~~
This was a good little game very original and the first i seen like this so props to you there, but there are a few things you could fix up, first of all "BACKROUNDS" you should add a backround scene or something the white
backround is just very bland, and 2nd "ANIMATION" make your little stick character be animated like when he is on the crane thingie

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I pointed out a few tips, backrounds, more character design, hope this will help you to make a much better flash

~~OVERALL~~
Its differant but notbad at all

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[Horny Scarecrow]

A pleasent flash

~~REVIEW~~
A nice and pleasent flash here, sound was even good, allthough i wouldnt mind seeing some subtitles, but all n all

it was pretty good. the subtitles is not an big issue but its a nice feature to have

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe add some differant scenes , like take it into differant scenes, and some subtitles would be nice

~~OVERALL~~
A pleasently good flash here

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[The Rock Defeated?]

Very short

~~REVIEW~~
It was very short maybe too short, but i did get a giggle out of this, maybe to improve add some more killing options, a "KNIFE" An "AXE" other "GUNS" etc. so by adding a few adjustments as i suggested, will greatly make this much more enjoyable, some things to think about next time around, good luck regardless

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As i said some other guns would have been the right choice, now just work on them

~~OVERALL~~
Could use a few details, hope my tips help

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[MI v1.0]

silly game but still neato

~~REVIEW~~
Heh a silly game here but it was fun and cute, and did i forget to say silly hehe i liked it, the "MUSIC" was really good, ifact i believe the music really flowed well with the content of this game, the game itself could use more content and more stuff to do actually but anyways nice game

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make another version but add more content, keep the music and add much more to do as interactivity, it was a decent game though

~~OVERALL~~
Amusing little game, needs more content

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[diogoshx flash tutorial]

A decent tutorial

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm a decent tutorial here, its rather simple, kinda too simple but it does show the basics and you presented the tutorial in a simpple way in which may help newer people learning flash, i was not fond of the buttons though, maybe give some sleeker design of buttons or something

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add some sleeker buttons maybe some borders/frames to give it a more fresh look to it as i thought it was sorta on the simple side

~~OVERALL~~
nice tutorial here

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diogoshx responds:

oO

thank you very much!

glad you like

remeber that was my 1º tutorial...

i am Learning to improve with the reviews! :D