XwaynecoltX's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Honking Lenin]

This was cool

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was neat, i liked it, but the humor was so-so, i would sugest adding more humor to it. more jokes or some odd and random things happing somehow, just give it that funny and much more entertaining factor that will allow more fans to enjoy this on a much more funnier level, anyways good luck on any updates and or new versions.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
needs work on the humor more jokes and such

~~OVERALL~~
it was amusing but still needs more humor.

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[The Menu/Button Tutorial]

Decent could be better though.

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this had some dark music behind it, not too dark but thats what it sounded like from the menu screen, now here is where i like to take abit of time and comment on your menu effort here you had, now with this one the flash and the menu were pretty much the same with the whole "BLACK" backround, and white text, thats not bad at all, but i wouldnt mind seeing some more "COLOR" something that will really bringout the content and design of it all, and sometimes these types of tutorials tend to be just plain straigh forward, the music helps, but you wanna try and make it differant from the normal tutorial, and color and more of a fresh look, might be that way, as for the tutorial itself its pretty neat and basic, i would think about adding more stuff not just the few ones you had, so, adding a more fresh look with color, and even some more ideas like more game stuff, maybe even add stuff that may not have been used before even if thats a hard one to do, anyways just a few ideas, but for the most part i liked this, especially the music, anyways keep up the good flash making.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I mentiond a couple of ideas, as this seemed too dark and needed more color and a more fresh look to it, also more ideas on tutorials would also be key to improving.

~~OVERALL~~
a decent tutorial.

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[Avoidance 4: Classic]

Fresh, simple and, fun

~~REVIEW~~
Well first off i would like to say that the menu screen was prettty awsome with lots of color shapes and design it caught my attention so props to the artist, even the animation in the backround was neat, an idea might to have those "ORBS" spinning or bouncing off the walls or something just an idea though, and as for the "MUSIC" that was pretty awsome aswell, really catchy and amusing seems very fitting for the flash, the one thing that bothered me throughout this was that the filesize was just a tad big, not an issue for my machine but im sure large files like this do give other users a more slower loading time, just something to think about when making these kinda large files, now this is a pretty simple and fun game so instructions arnt really needed, i would suggest, adding some just because its a nice feature to have i did find myself when first playing this making the "SQUARE" run into the orb lol at first the red then the green lol, but like i said not needed but might be nice to have, But i do have to say that the "CODING" on this seemed pretty good, no gliches at all and ran pretty smooth so i did like this, and had lots of fun on top of that, so nice game here, fresh and fun.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Possibly add an "INSTRUCTION" section, not really needed but it would be a nice liitle feature,

~~OVERALL~~
A fun and fresh game, very simple but still fun

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TheSongSalad responds:

Thanks for the review man, it's really appreciated.

[Newgrounds Medals]

Its decent

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so thought i would see what this was all about, my first points are that its a pretty big "FILE" size that might be something to work on, now im thinking you packed alot of stuff in thats why for the large file size, but anyways, ok so, as i look through all the options, they are notbad, i thought you could have used abit more, but seems like you have put fourth alot of work with this so yes there is some good effort used, and the design of it seems awsome, maybe its abit too "CRAMPED" though, spreading stuff out more might help on this though, i like alot of the features like the scrolling of all the nedals, and info on how to imput medals and so on, so this was some good bit of info on medals which was probably needed and very usefull, so props to you on a good flash here, i enjoyed it, now to improve on this, not sure, but like i said before everything looks abit cramped, and could be spreadout abit more, just an idea thouogh, i would like to see other versions maybe something thats not so graphics enhanced, its a good flash though, so keep up the decent work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few things like, not so cramped style, and maybe even some other version thats not so graphics enhanced, just a few thoughts thoough

~~OVERALL~~
good info, almost like a tutorial

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EventHorizon responds:

you're right about "file size" also because I completely forgot to compress this flash, I am glad you liked it and thank you for your advice and your vote!

[Pyroscape 2]

another fun game here

~~REVIEW~~
Aww ok so i saw this one earlie and finally have a chance to review it, but anyways the Flash starts off pretty good, and im still enjoying the mixture of real people and the mix in there of art and animation, once again it gives it something unique as its not always seen, also nice job on adding the "SKIP" button that was pretty neat, one thing i think this could use, and i may or may not have mentioned this in past movies/games of yours, but it could possibly use some "SUBTITLES" not that it was bad sounding or anything just seems like a nice feature to have, gives the game abit more too it, Now there is an old trick to these types of games in "FLASH" it basicly allows the user playing the game to cheat, ill mention it later as to not spoil it for other viewers, but its a certain key, there is a way to lock this option up so users dont have that option to cheat in the game, but anyways i like the buttons alot better then in other games, But i must say this was a nifty little game you all have here, its fun and has somewhat of an entertaining value, it would be nice to ad some other fun features maybe some sorta "MINI-GAME" option or something for like bonus. anyways great game keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well as mentions, a mini game would be nice, and also try and lock the "TAB" key in the action-scripting so people cant just cheat through it fast, other then that it was a fun game

~~OVERALL~~
So overall a fun game in the series, could use some fixes, and extra stuff for a more entertaining value of the game

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Fro responds:

Dude the whole game was like 5 mini games lol

[Kees' Adventure: TLC]

Fresh and simple game

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so first off, you do have a cute little game here, i like how this game starts off with some good fonts a in the title, and just some overall good graphics, simple yet refreshing with the graphics, The game is actually a pretty cute and layed back game, funny stuff to see, and once again nice job on the fresh and simple graphics, the game at times felt glichy, like i didnt like not seeing the "CURSUR" at times, i much rather being able to click on buttons such as the start button and other times it happened, the game play was also simple which i liked you didnt have us doing lots of crazy things like some games do but just had a few good things, and just let it play off like that, now i would suggest to make it so i can click on buttons with cursur but that might just be my own personal opinion and choice, but you did have a cute game here and hope to see more soon.anyways great game.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
have the cursur be shown throughout the entire flash when doing stuff, could have just been the onetime i played but seemed to paus up sometimes not the cursur moving off the viewscreen but just pausing to me i think its the same issue of the no cursur at times just a thought.

~~OVERALL~~
Fun cute and fresh game, i had fun with this

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kcnh responds:

Thank you for your review, I'll be sure to look into click menus for the next game.

[Ragdoll Man Tag]

fun time waster

~~REVIEW~~
This was a fun timewaster, its funny at first when it started i thought it was just a movie looping or something then soon realised it was not, as i understood the controlls, it was pretty funny and crazy, the code on this is pretty neat, the controlls of dragging this character were pretty smooth, and the "BLOOD" splatter was neat, im thinking it could be better like make the blood "SPLATTER" and stain parts of walls and rocks and such, also add more color in the backround with abit more detail on the walls and rocks, also there should be a way to switch off into other scenes so one doesnt get bored in the same one, but other then that it was a pretty fun game

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
well i think it could be better maybe with a scene or backround changer, and more detail in the walls and rocks, and i also mentioned a possiblity of having the blood stain on the grounds and walls

~~OVERALL~~
fun and simple game

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[Free Rider 2]

wow crazy

~~REVIEW~~
wow this was pretty crazy of a game, i liked it though, there are lots you can do with this, i can see other versions but as for this one, i would start off with some color back there some more options like platforms and such, to really give it that edge that puts it apart from the rest, but with abit of color and more effect features like when you do back flips would be a nice start

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add some effects like when you do some back flips, also the backround needs some color to it

~~OVERALL~~
Fun game here with lots to do

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[Donuts in Danger]

grapics are good

~~REVIEW~~
Great game here awsome color and fresh looking artwork, now ill first comment on the "MENU SCREEN" the option of having to use "CTRL" seems odd i think you should make it so you can allow the user to just click on buttons like the start buttons, most games tend to be that way and it makes for a more easier game that way.The game itself also seems to lagg abit especially when shoot lots and when the enemy is shooting aswell, and on slower machines it must be hell, so maybe less intense grapcis will help this. all and all this was a cute and good game kept me entertained needs a few things to be fixed but for the most part it was entertaining

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make it less graphic intense maybe a little less detail on the art might help maybe even less shooting from the ship and enemies aswell

~~OVERALL~~
Fun game needs some cleaning up abit

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