XwaynecoltX's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Uncle Bob-Level 2]

Decent for an older flash game

So first i will start off with the intro itspretty good was not too much but it was nice to see an intro before the actaul flash starts up, there was not much but still a decent intro made it even more enjoyble, so nice effort there. Ok so the game is actually pretty fun, its really fast kinda hard that way and the "CROSS-HAIR" could have been better, have the cross hair on all the time, and it would be nice to have a bigger screen area and more to move around in, but for the mostpart this was pretty good, nice job and nice effort below are a few tips on improving this and making it even better, good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So first off a bigger view screen would be nice so you can see mor and move around much more, You should think about adding a Cross-fire, instead of the cursor arrow it makes it look like you are really using a weapon of some sort, and gives the player that sense of feel that they really are killing or shooting something. So a cress-fire would be perfect in this situation, so give it a try and it might be the perfect choice. also youmay want to slow down the action somewhat aswell,

~~OVERALL~~
An entertaining game, could use some better options and could be slower.

[Flirt (Dress Up)]

Decent game

~~REVIEW~~
This was a pretty nifty game, you presented alot of items so that was a plus, especially on a dress-up, the girl herself was notbad, so decent drawing there, notbad at all, and i was generally pleased with the outcome of it all, it possbly could have used some sorta music choices, but other then that this was pretty good and decent artwork, as for improving just that said about some music choices would be nice, other then that it was alright, good luck on whatever else you got going on though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So one suggestion made was to have some music ideas some music loops would be nice.

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining decent amount of items to dress up in this decent dress-up girl game.

[Paper Warfare]

Fantastic game

I remember playing this awhile back and never really getting a chance to review it so as i play it again i remember how fun this is, and the whole idea of paper stuff was such a nice idea and made it more fun then ever, the gameplay was really good, and this is the type of game that has some good replay value and such, the visuals and graphics was great even as paper, also nice job on bringing it all together with some nice sounds and sound/fx, very fun game and great medals, maybe you should think about adding even more medals though, but for the mostpart this was pretty awsome.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The onlything i would like to see changed or upgraded might be some more medal options, maybe even have some sorta mini game that allows you to win even more medals anyways nice effort

~~OVERALL~~
Fun game great idea with the whole paper idea, very good and everyone should enjoy this one.

[presidential knockout]

Fun Game

~~REVIEW~~
So as always expected from miniclip you bring us a great fresh flash with a small size and thats a plus in that aspect of stuff, You always bring good quality of visuals, and great animations aswas the idea with this flash, so welldone on your efforts on bringing up an awsome flash, The controls were a tad confusing to get use too, you may want to make them somewhat easier or as i would say more user Friendly, Now the idea that its a boxing game was pretty fun and kept me wanting to play more, The differant characters were neat, The game was pretty fast paced wich it should be, but anyways you guys have a good game here, very fun and entertaining, really enjoyed it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as for some improvments, im not sure but the onlything it really lacked was probably more "DETAIL" and graphics effects. aswell as the following, you may want to make the controls somewhat easier or as i would say more user Friendly, they were hard to get use too,

~~OVERALL~~
So a good flash game you have some decent visuals fun and fast paced all will enjoy it as i did.

[Goth Chick Dress Up]

I like the dark theme here

~~REVIEW~~
So this one was more goth girl related that was ok, kinda neat since you dont see that much, The "MUSIC" is pretty good and fits the theme very well, The loading on this seemed to take up some time abit, But as the game started it was kinda worth it, So as the game started, it was pretty good, and the character was pretty good, and the amount of items was evene better, allthough you could add some more color and animated items in the mix of all the dark stuff, but other then that this was actually pretty good, on a last note, you might want to add some sorta scene-selector.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I thought i would use this little area to help suggest some sort of improvments in making certain things better, so try some of these tips and ideas out as it can only make things better, and even bring you a better overall outcome. you had a decent amount of items, you could add some more color and animated items in the mix of all the dark stuff, I personally love these types of games, the things that really make these work to there best potential, is a few things but one important thing is to have a related backround, just a white or bland backrounds are ok but just not much there. anyways hope that helps.

~~OVERALL~~
A good dark theme dress-up here, could use a tad of color though.

[Summer Skater]

Ok so this was a fun game

This was fun and differant, the graphics were pretty good, the gameplay was even better and ran pretty smooth, but i suppose this does get a little repettitive, it could be better in that aspect of things i do like the game score and option to submit scoresso it did have options for the user or player, it ran pretty good with no real issue, maybenot having the cursur up there and just have theskateboarder as a better idea, but anyways good game i had alot of fun with this one and it was neat in the straight forward view, i look forward to more of these games, you should think about adding some medals it would really push up the game popularity,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some extras like some medals, maybe remove the cursor as stated above, but it was a pretty good game.

~~OVERALL~~
Fun game really enjoyed it, lots of fun im sure everyone else will enjoy this.

[Escape Pico's Mansion]

Another decent game of pico

Ok so heres another pico game, notbad at all on this one i guess i could understand the "SIZE" it was abit much but then again the content was really good so in the end it was worth it, and congrats on winning an award on this so guess it reaaly was all worth it, also like the addition of medals on this one, that made it that much more fun and entertaining, Only problem for me. also love how this is in the whole "PIXLE" form, almost reminds me of my series and ghost motel. so anyways onto the game, I am glad youkept the same style as the old and original pico games, still had that feel and such, so anyways good game here i really liked it, keep up the awsome work, i look forward to more from you.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So this was pretty good pretty close to the original, and the medals were neat, onlything i can suggest would be lower filesize somewhat.

~~OVERALL~~
A fun pico game alot like the originals, everyone should enjoy this one, as i did.

[IHOP Waitress Soundboard]

Funny board

Ok so for starters this was notbad, the board itself is ok kinda entertaining, i love hopw you have alot of differant sounds with this one and such, I also like how you made this all into like a menu of sorts and the voice was real seems like it, Now the one thing about alot of these types of sound boards is they are just the sounds but you should add some clip with each sound, that would really make it more interesting for the viewer of the board. The soundboard was pretty good and does show some good effort on your part here, the text as buttons could be better aswell, maybe more of a box or circle would make it click over better and look better, but anyways nice job its a good game i actually did like this one, anyways untill next time good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
first of all good game, could use a few fixes and changes for better improvment ofcourse, i have suggested a few ideas to help and hope you have the time to put some of them in as it will only improve on your good idea already, Now the one thing about alot of these types of sound boards is they are just the sounds but you should add some clip with each sound, that would really make it more interesting for the viewer of the board. You may want to work on your buttons more too, the textonly style buttons are kind of hard at times and dont click over as good as they cn be.

~~OVERALL~~
And overall this was a good game i had fun reviewing it, there was actuallysome fun sounds with this one, and you showed some nice effort, keep up the good work.

JuneLinMilliam responds:

After I took a look at your newgrounds it is like a honor to get a review from you lol. I started making soundboards in 2008 and what I like to do is try to make them not look the same as you can see by the SSFIV soundboards I did. If you put your mouse over the text and move it near the end you will see that it is made with a box around it but you just can not see it. I am open to better ideas when I make these and will try to use new things when I learn them. Thank you very much for the review!