XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Storm the Manor]

Decent track

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this is notbad, it has a nice rythem to it and flows nicely, kinda reminds me something out of {STARWARS} any relation, but anyways it has a straight forward feel and basicly stays that way, it doesnt have much of a big cliffhangor or anything wich is something it could probably have since its like a {STORM} and could have some big bangs in there and such, maybe something at the {END} that has some loud base? just an idea there that could push it over the edge, for the most part it was just straight forward and not too blasting.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
needs some cliffhangar in there maybe some drums and such. and a louder feel wouldnt hurt.

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[Pezmobile - Distant Tomb]

Nice fast tempo

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm now this was an interesting track, it started off slow but soon picked up very fast then you had some strange yet differant sounds mixing in here and there and thats one thing i really liked about this one, the beat gets faster and louder very nice touch there, now some harder beats could be installed especially when it gets to be a fast tempo, maybe some hard drums towards the end? just an idea, so overall i like it and an end improving tip would be ad some hard beats in there with the fast tempo so it has that end {WOW} anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nice work here adding an ending powerful dominate drum beat might give it that end climax, but all together its decent.

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Pezmobile responds:

Thanks alot dude.

[Gandalf's Dead Cover]

Sadness = awsome

~~REVIEW~~
Oh nice, your songs and tracks get much better with time, now at first this started off {IFFY} but as you listen it has that feel as the title says, so in a sense it does get sad, but thats ok, now i love that you keep it on the low sounding feel and go in and out with it, so you really can express that emotion and makes you feel like you are there in that situation, now normally i might say spice it up for improving but this one is perfect as the feel is sad and i like that, so as for improving i would leave it as is, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggest leaving this as is not touching it, cause the emotion of sadness is there.

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[Echoes in the Wind]

Decent track

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm ok so i decided to review some of your stuff, now this one really starts off too quiet, or soft sounding even 20 seconds into it its quiet, you should raise the tempo up abit and alot sooner, its a good song even the {SIZE} was decent, so to improve on this decent track you have, speed up the starting and add some loder or faster tempo going in there, besides all that it was decent and pretty mellow for most of it but still has a good feel, so nice job on this one hope to hear more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As explained needs a higher sounding feel and or a faster tempo, it needs to be spiced up somewhat

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doppler73 responds:

Hey, this is my first audio submission, so i was learning when i made this.

[Dream of Water and Land]

Soothing and pleasent

~~REVIEW~~
Hey now, this was another good track of yours, it is very soft though, you might want to raise it up a notch, now this is a soft and pleasent feel of a song so i can understand it should be that way, but a little higher wouldnt hurt, its soothing and seems to flow on like in some story like something is sailing away or some sad moment, more of a sad moment, i can really see this being in a very dramatic flash so props to you for bringing out the emotion on this one, can this be improved on? yeah maybe with some deeper sounds and differant pitches here and there, anyways nice track

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As above some deeper pitches and raise and lower sound quality

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Semaphore responds:

thank you very much XwaynecoltX

[Tropicana]

Cute track

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm this is pretty neat, i like the little piano you got going in this one, its not fast at all but keeps it flowing pleasent, the sound quality is pretty good too, not too low or too load, kinda just there, so notbad at all, i do however think you need to mix it up though its alot of the same, it has this cute feel but could use a change here and there, But anyways cute track here, nice flowing and again has something cute to it, as for improving try and mix something else in there, anyways untill next time nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nees some mixing of another instrament along with the cute playing you already have.

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[Galaxy Of Light]

Top notch

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm now this was a very pleasent tune, not too overbarring or too low or too soft at all, just a nice and pleasent feel, very easy flowing there is really nothing i can suggest to improve on this one, cause i think its pretty right on as is, not perfect but its almost there, i just love the pleasent and easy flowing of this, so very impressed with what you have here, but i suppose if i could suggest any changes and or improving it might be, to lower the filesize just a tad, other then that its top notch in my book, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some file reducing would be a start.

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Semaphore responds:

thank you very much

this was my second song Iv'e ever created for about 2 years as I start making music =)

[Thunderstruck! Electric]

Notbad at all

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm this has an interesting sound to it, it is fast paced to kinda like in an action scene, so i can see this being used in some sorta flash, The {QUALITY} of the sound was great and even though it was fast paced it ran smoothly with high end quality wich is why i liked it alot, not the best work, but its still at the top of my list and while this is one of your older pieces its still very good quality so props to you on this one, as for improving i dont see much but if anything should be said or even suggested, maybe have some {DEEP} bases in there at times that slowly pick up, idk kinda random but still something anyways nice job on this audio track.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well not much from my point of view but maybe adding some deep base once in awhile would mix it up somewhat, anyways nice job.

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Semaphore responds:

AC/DC FTW =D

thank you very much XwaynecoltX

[-ganon95- Bit.trip Part2- CORE]

Decent

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm ok this was differant it has some variaty in it but it changes too much but i like how you blend the changes so it doesnt have a gap between changes, i think you could rais the volume at times but that could just me, the quality is pretty decent though, for the mostpart its a good little tune, now on improving, volume raising, and more variaty but not at the cost of such a size, but it is decent track here, anyways good luck in anything new coming up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the gaps between variarty mixes is too long, and raise the volume in the gap points.

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ganon95 responds:

it changes too much?

i don't understand why i keep hearing this. its SUPPOSED to change up often, i don't want it to sound repetitive...the gaps are too long? at the most these gaps are like 3 seconds long.

though, i do agree the volume is a bit low at times.

[Break the Targets 2]

Awsome fast paced tune

~~REVIEW~~
Wow this is actually a really kicking tune very fast paced, and just moves along at a very fast pace but thats how i like this and it has some really good playing, especially with the {PIANO} was pleasently sounding just an overall pleasent tune, love the fast paced of it, so if anything can be improved on this i would put in differant instraments maybe you can kick in the speed with those, but my fave part is the fast paced awsome stuff a very nifty tune, so anyways good luck on all stuff, i love this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add some other nifty sounds but for the mostpart its nifty

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