Needs some better quality
~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this had something but the "QUALITY" of the recording seemed way off, and thats what messed this one up, as it was so hard to hear the track you wanted us to hear, so maybe, if you re-did it and a better quality recording, no scratchyness and just take your time with it it could have better results. anyways good luck on your next entry.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A new version is needed with a better mixcpossibly, maybe even start it out slow then build it up.
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