XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[ranxx beat one]

Differant

~~REVIEW~~
Something differant and quick, these short loops tend to be short and hard to review, but i will do the best that i can, it has a nice drum beat and is kicking fact so nice job there, also has that "ALIEN" so i could see this used in a number of fast action packed flashes, maybe you shouldnt be beating on the drums all the time, kinda space it out abit so it doesnt seem so repetitive, and also you could make it longer, so its more like a track instead of a loop, now ofcourse more sounds would be nice aswell, anyways just a few idea to tryout.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Space out the drums so its not so repetitive, and add more sounds so make it abit longer.

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[-Distant Lands-]

Nice variaty

~~REVIEW~~
Oh wow, the music does get better over time here now this one i liked because you did have a variaty of instraments from piano to trumpets, but this one was abit more better put together, the "TRUMPETS" were really amazing thought it seemed with the piano and trumpets and even the "FLUTE" that the song really shined through, so really nice job there, and i really enjoyed this especially since i played a trumpet when in grade school, so anyways props to you and i can see how your skills are getting better, now as to improve, maybe make the trumpets have a more dominating role.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have the trumpets played more aswell as the flute, as its something i have not heard of a combination.

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Step responds:

Yeah you're exactly right about this one. I like the trumpets too since they give the song a sort of fantasy, adventure theme to it, and I agree that it could have been used a bit more with the flute, but in any case this is a pretty old song of mine; one of my first. My new ones are a lot better :P.

Anyway, thanks for the great review!

[Im Ready]

Great start

~~REVIEW~~
Now this was pretty interesting of a track, the start of this really seemed alot better then the ladder end of things only because the second part of this piece seemed off as the sounds were not original or something, dont get me wrong i love "GUITAR" stuff it just sounded differant of that then normal, Now as the starting of this it was pretty good, has a good "UPBEAT" feel and it had me going up untill that second part, so these are things you could possibly fix and possibly even make better, and i do look forward to any changes and or new versions, or even improvments on newer stuff as this is an older piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try and pick up the second part and have it not feel so off maybe its the guitar or other sounds but is off.

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[Energy-bass]

Interesting Loop

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm well this was an interesting loop you have here, its a deep base loop, and i can see it being used for a number of stuff, seems like its too short even for a loop, you should think about adding some other sounds in there keeping them at a base deepness is fine but still ad something more then the deep base you got going, nice loop regardless.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
so besides the deep base i feel this needs abit more otherwose its too plain, just other extra stuff that gives it that extra push while still keeping the deep base feel.

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[Energy]

Needs to sound better

~~REVIEW~~
OK so this one was interesting it did seem abit "SCRATCHY" throughout the track and seemed abit low in sound quality, you had some nice "CHIMES" and a good beat but the mic quality seemed to ruin it, so this is something you could possibly try working on for improvment, give it a try and see some better results, anyways good luck on your next entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I believe a better mic, and hight sound quality would help on this greatly.

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[Altered Beast: Stage 1-C]

Needs more differant sounds

~~REVIEW~~
again these seem too short, they are much more like loops then anything else, but you still do have something here, you could spice it up with some other sounds and mixes, like drums and i have mentioned this somewhat before but its an idea that will improve on this so give it a try and see what happens, you will for sure get better results.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer, and add more differant sounds to it.

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[GP's Metal Riff A-02]

Needs some better quality

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this had something but the "QUALITY" of the recording seemed way off, and thats what messed this one up, as it was so hard to hear the track you wanted us to hear, so maybe, if you re-did it and a better quality recording, no scratchyness and just take your time with it it could have better results. anyways good luck on your next entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A new version is needed with a better mixcpossibly, maybe even start it out slow then build it up.

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[Opaquely Clouds]

Pleasent

~~REVIEW~~
This was very pleasent kinda did sound like the ocean, a smooth feel like if a sail boat is just sailing a way its very soft and pleasent i really enjoyed this, i dont see much at all to improve on this but if i was to say anything give it a mix of some even {SOFTER} sounds, maybe throw in some slightly deeper ones, but not too much as to take away from what you have but anyways you really have an awsome piece here keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some softer mixes in there wouldnt hurt

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Semaphore responds:

Thank you very much XwaynecoltX =)

[Narcotic Melody II]

Decent tune

~~REVIEW~~
This one is abit on the slow side, but i really like the {PIANO} in this one, wish it had a faster tempo though, as for the voices in the backround that is actually a decent touch, and gives it an almost scary feel, especialy from what it sounded like coming from the voices, but like i said gives that scary feel. the piano is deep but again needs a faster temp and that would be the improving part other then that its pretty decent work, anyways keep up the good job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Faster tempo on the piano that was my take on it.

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