XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[=Final March=]

Something inspiring

Glad i found this one today as this one was pretty interesting, has some nice elements going for it and you even suprised me a few times on tis one, but as i do get started here i like what i hear so-far. This was alot of things but i believe what i got most out of it was an inspiring tone about it, and it has a good final fantasy feel also, and it starts off loud and clear with a bang so nice work here on this one, and i really like how this plays out throughout the whole tune, it could be longer though. And after hearing that a few times i can honestly say i was pretty impressed with the outcome, its was not great but it had an interest and a unique take on things.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so here we are and another day and another audio, notbad with what you have here today, there were some good things about this one but there are also some things you could spice up and or clean up and here is what i found. The onlything i thought you could work on here would be to make this longer stretch out this track maybe have more phases of this and each phase it changes up, just a thought though.

[<==Stomp the Sand==>]

This has aunique sounds

Now this was something different, while not exactlyperfect i still found this to be an interesting piece, and as i played this a few times it came more clear of how much effort did go into this so nice effor on this. Now this has a unique sound to it, its got a good vibe and its more on a deeper touch then a light feel,I felt it was kind of short though maybe you can stretch it out abit more later, buti like how you did this with even the piano mix in there so nice job on this piece. And now that i have heard this a few times now i must say this one really grew on me, i like this entry because its a unique style and you did put the effort in to show something unique.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
OK so i think i have some things you could work on not sure it will be much but try some things out and these optionc can only make it slightly better but hope it does help out so look into some of these options if you have the time. And so i didnt find much to improve on as this was a pretty solid piece, but i did think you could make this one longer and stretch out the sounds more, so try some things out.

[<==Raining Rage==>]

Something different

Something different here and thats what i was looking for, you have shown that, it was the little things here and there on this that made it pretty interesting and unique ofcourse. Now here was something different, i love the title and i especially like how this has a dark touch to it, also the rain in the baclround makes this work very well especially with the title and all, but a good dark feel here as mentioned. good workonthis piece. I thought there could have been more but it was already unique and such, you had my attention as soon as it started, and love the little detail you have put fourth on this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so that brings us to this little area of some improvment, not sure where to start since most of this was pretty good, but i think you can fine-tune a few points and i will do my best to get them accorss in a positive way ofcourse. There was few to coment and detail since it was already good, but maybe adding more edge and making it longer but give it some more piano playing maybe even get into a faster phase down the stretch.

[<==Cry Out In Terror==>]

An interesting sound here

A good track here i like how this is presented and sounds, has some good quality seems like it could use some more stuff too it though, but i will get to that ofcourse. Alright so this was pretty interesting and it gets started right away, so was notbad at all, i like what is here and it has a good vibe about it, infact this will be one of my faves especially from the day, i think the only issue here is that it is just too short, or ends eruptly so maybe thats something to work on. And so as i end this review, good woek, keep up more style like you have here and hope to hear more of this kind of stuff from you, it was fun and a pleasure.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
OK so this is where i suggest a few things that can possbly help and improve on things, and i really do you look into some of the options that i have availble. And some options or feedback i think is important here is that it was just too small or short, you should think aboout extending and stretching it somewhat more.

[/BBQ\ -- Once]

Nice piano

Ok so first off good piece here, it was a pleasure checking this out especially this kind of entry and had some nice sounds and element about it. I love how this startsoff and theres some good direction and has some decent quality about it, it kinda jumps out at ya with its fast paced atfirst but then thats what really makes it work, so nice job on this one, and great piano stuff. Now before i end this i would like to say that this was a pleasure and loved how this started and ended there was some good quality and it was unique in its own way, so nice touch here from start to finish.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Alright so you already had something decent here i will try and suggest some possible ideas but you have done well already but in anycase try some of these things out. Now it was a good tune here, no real issues i suppose i wouldnt mind seeing some more clean up in the backround some slight static but not too much.

[-Ab0ve the cl0uds-]

Nice and classy

So this was a nice and classypiece here, not perfect but has some nice feel to it and itjust runs through with some good sounds here, so not perfect but not bad either. Alright this was a classy tune here the oiano playing is pretty smooth and it all seems to come together very well here, there was some slight static in the backround but very little, the drums and piano really work well together here, a good piece if you ask me, And to end it here ill leave it at that a decent piece not much at all needed for some improvments but still a classy piece if you ask me, so i will say keep up the good work, and hope to hear more from you soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not sure how to improve on this piece as its a pretty solid piece, but i will do my best here to add some insight on somethng but regardless this was notbad. Alright so here is what i came up with, it could be a tad longer, there was some slight static that doesnt really bother anyone but something to look into, other then that this was notbad at all.

1zin1 responds:

I don't know how your comment slipped by me for so long, and i apologize for that.
But i REALLY appreciate the comments and well constructed critique.
Granted this song is a couple years old now, i admire your attention to helping me improve.
Thanks again for the comment. :D

-Zin-

[(FMC) -=Lost in a Trance=-]

Nice piece

So a random choice for me on this one in the portal but it was a good find and you showed some interesting sounds with a good mix of things i really liked what you have brought to the table, now onto more of the review in detail. Nice and kicking tune here, it starts off right away with thekicking sound and you give it some good quality, i think its missing some better build up and even an ending with a big end piece but anyways this was still pretty good and of some good quality. And so that was a nice piece a nice sound a nice piece all together, some things could be improved or added but i will get to it, in just a tad. but sofar good stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Alrigh so that was a pleasent track and a nice find i found today, there is some room for some change though, i thought these ideas could work so do look into them and if not its all good. A few things could make this better like more build up and a grand finale at the end, but even if you dont change anything you still have a great piece, look into some of these ideas if you like.

[The Noble Cause (song)]

Its stuff like this that really take me back on these types because they show the quality and time, and really give off a nice feeling to them, so keep up this kind of tune as its very pleasent This was an interesting tune like a song and it really shows the effort and time that must have gone into this, it sounds decenthas a soft feel and touch on this, i wouldnt mind more of a edge and such but it was pretty good regardless. And to end things here, keep up the style, keep up the effort, and keep making these types, let inspiration take a hold of it and let it shine like no other, sorry if i got corny there but let it flow as you do.

~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~
And so i may have some possble ideas here, but honestly you have a good piece already and you could leave it as is and it would still be fine, but here are some ideas kinda basic but they should still work if you are still updating and if not good luck with future stuff. Well like i said there is not much at all that needs changing but maybe throw in some more edge more beats to a darker feel just so that there is more build up.

samulis responds:

Thanks for the review. It's a bit too late to go back and change anything on this piece, it's from a rather long time ago! But thank you for the ideas. :)

[Eternal]

Nice sounds

These kind of tracks always have a good touch and feel to them, they are decent, and in some cases kind of differant but thats what i like about them, so what i have to say is that i was pleased with what you came up with, keep that kind of style up. Nice flowing andpleasent theme here it was nothing too crazy but it was a soothing tune, i think you could spice this up with some edge to it some build up to it and even more deeptunes to it, just a few things to think about in the progression of making this better. so keep up the decent work as this one. Now to end this, you have a decent piece there is some open discussion for some improvment just a tad here or there, but other then that this was actually notbad at all,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So like i said there are some options for some improvments just here or there, and i have gone and suggested a few here and hope they can help and hope you have the time to improve on this, because it will be well worth the effort, regardless of what you do good stuff indeed. So this one seemed like it needed more of a build up, more of adeep sounds and overall more of an edge to it as i have mentioned.

[Death Slumber]

I like it

A good piece here, it was a nifty track with a little extra added and that went along way in making this a pretty good piece of quality. there are some possble changes that i will explain later, but i like what you have done sofar, sokeep that energy going. This was notbad i did notice there was some static to it though, maybe that could be cleared up it could be on purpose thouse but it didint sound right for some reason, but regardless i still thought the tune was pretty decent, but regardless its notbad work,hope to hear more of your work soon, And nowto end this, but not before i coment on your piece, there is some slight work to be done but you still know what you want and like and thats all that really matters so keep up the good sound work its looking good sofar.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And now for some changes that will make things work and sound slightly better with this one it was already pretty good, So here is what i came up with wich is probably not the greatest but its something to work with and you have the go ahead to make any changes you see fit. So with some changes like with the static and all this might have more clear and sharp sounds unless that was your whole idea from the start.

ZLEAP responds:

Man I got to this one SUPER late. Sorry about that.

Glad you enjoyed this one. But this is one of those things that will remain what it is. I've since lost the dream and would feel a great amount of guilt proceeding with production without it.