XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Whodunit]

Very nice

Its always nice to check out something different and thats what I found in this track and you have dawned on us a unique piece here. You have a nice piece here the sound almost sounded a bit "MUFFLED" not sure if that was the intent or if it was the "MIC" but anyways a good track you have here really nice piece here. So now this was a pleasure to checkout it is one of those kinds of pieces that really draws you in with some deep thaught, so an interesting piece for sure.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some muffled sound but could be nothing.

~X~

[[ not another love song ]]

Very beautifull

This was something special here a beautifull piece, I did however think this was a tad short though, could be much longer maybe a few lyrics and such, very soft very soothing and you gave it some good love and passion so nice work on this piece a pleasent piece at that.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned could be longer.

~X~

[Chrono Trigger - Bike Race]

Cool

Wow this was pretty cool, a nice beat here with some nice backround sounds even and some nice instraments that really smoothed things out here it was pretty pleasent and you are really good with the piano a very nice tune here if you ask me, some nice stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There could actually be a bit more drums even some bass.

~X~

[DigitalNoiz - Hypnotize]

I like

You have tested the boundaries with this one, and those are the types of tracks that I really want to check out more so nice start up here. Very nice beat here really starts off with some nice bass and changes up a bit, I could see you slowing the bass down just a tad so that you can have some sort of build up, but its a nice piece if you ask me. So everyday I look for stuff and enjoy all that the portal has to offer and while not to drag this review on anymore, its your style that keeps me comming back to the portal for stuff like this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some slower parts as to build up on.

~X~

[Metroid 1 - Brinstar Theme]

cool

Not sure what this sounds like but it has a nice tempo going for it but I guess it does sound like a metroid theme thing, and very sharp sounding, wouldnt mind a faster tempo and a slow down so you can also then build it up aswell, but overall notbad stuff you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some faster tempo points then slow down periods.

~X~

[Kusturica]

circus

lol this one was cute and has the circus feel and sounds to it i like it and will ad this as one of my favourites its a real catchy song and like the tempo of it as it flows on through very smooth some nice little build ups too was a good song overall, anyways nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You could probably do without the "VOICES" but still entertaining.

~X~

[Desperate Times]

Really nice stuff

Kinda simular but not as much and dang sounds a lot like eminem but still with your own style its unique and the lyrics are really solid here and top notch stuff here, I was really impressed with the sharpness and quality you bring to the table, very well done piece indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more backround ambient sounds or even some street sound/fx.

~X~

ELEVENT responds:

appreciate it! this is really old some of the newer stuff is at ilovetowritemusic.com

[SharaX - Tokyovania Control]

Very solid piece

So all these sounds in one place you put it together in nice fashion, I love all the mix and variaty that you presented here today. Here you have a very solid piece you have braught us a great mix lots of variaty and different sounds and thats what made this great all the quality mix and variaty, so props to you on a great piece here. So pretty awsome stuff here, and cant wait to see what else you bring to the table but im sure if its like this it will be just as fantastic.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make some soft points so you can make some build up points.

~X~

[326E]

Very nice

So this sounds very good like the lyrics too kinda sounds familuar to emminem but still could use some work, but you seem to have some skills would love to see you move forward with this piece, great track here great words and awsome backround music aswell

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
To be very honest I couldnt find anything that really needs some upgrades, changes improving, you have a good quality piece here and I honestly like how this is by its own.

~X~

ELEVENT responds:

Thanks! Please visit ilovetowritemusic.com for more of my original music.

[The Lonely Road]

Wow beautifull

You really put the efforts in this one just the way that piano starts off and really comes in deep and sharp with some quality and style of things, This one actually sounds like a scary theme or a marching soldier, seems like it should have went longer cause at the end there it just stopped like it needed one more bit or something.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Seemed like it ended short and was missing something there at the end.

~X~

ConsciousAutomation responds:

This was one of my older theory pieces. Eventually, when I come back to producing, I hope to return to this type of track with the added benefit of better production.

Thanks for the review.