Could be longer
Wow this was pretty powerfull with some solid sounds all the way through I did think it was kind of a short piece but maybe this is something you could really make longer just stretching it out a tad bit not too much but a little bit more content would do the trick.
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So I found this one to be somewhat short maybe by adding a bit more tunes in there some other sounds and it could be a little bit fuller track.
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