Deep
This was a very deep tune here can't think of anything to really change on it except maybe a more climatic ending as it seemed to just cut off there or end there but as for the rest it was some really solid work and I really enjoyed the deep and emotional feel this has so very nice flavor you put into this lots of great energy here so a good piece maybe just some small effort on the ending
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned just some more work on the ending
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