Intense
So this was an "INTENSE" piece it was some what slow at first and I think adding some fade outs then building it up even more would be pretty nifty, So as I have listened to this track a few times its interesting some parts could be better, but it was a pretty good tune, it was differant in someways but most of all I did like what you presented here and ill just say keep going with that, its decent stuff, But anyways thats that and this was an interesting piece of some sounds yes different but also much more then that its one of those tunes that draws you in.
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I think adding some fade outs then building it up even more would be pretty nifty
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