Nice sound here
This was a nice sound you have going on in this one, I like that this is a long piece I do feel like it could use more mixes and twsts though seemed too much on a straight line and could use more variaty to it, but overall this was pretty solid, but anyways nice work here.
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I do feel like it could use more mixes and twsts though seemed too much on a straight line and could use more variaty to it
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