Too fast
So this was way too "FAST" and way too "SHORT" and I would have to say that the "QUALITY" was kind of low so this one does need some polish and my tip for that is make this longer make the quality louder, and ad more mixture and variaty to this piece, anyways nice effort here.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
my tip for that is make this longer make the quality louder, and ad more mixture and variaty to this piece
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