Cool
Nice story here you have some good ideas in this story telling theme here and I was pretty impressed with it, These kinds of audio are different but "I-FIND-THEM-TO-BE-UNIQUE" because of the story and such, "YOU-DO-MAKE-IT-COME-ALIVE" and thats why I like this as much as I do.
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This was a good story no changes needed
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