XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Eliaz and Roza's Bondage: Linger]

Very nice

So this was some nice work here love the animation and you have some really nice sexy character work here, you could make more animation points, the art detail and effort shows also bringing some good energy and thats what you did here. Well before I go, Gotta say that this one really stands out and shows off your talent

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
you could make more animation points

~X~

Aster-Effect responds:

thank you very much, yeah those 'power couples' are adorable and i like them too :D

[Storm]

Really nice

The character is slick and shiny the lightning is awsome seems like it could have been more glowing but overall this was pretty impressive, it has some nice elements its unique and differant, so you have the skills and you just outdid yourself with this piece it is an automatic fave of mine

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
the lightning is awsome seems like it could have been more glowing

~X~

devilhs responds:

Thanks

[Head Patting Monika]

Cute char

A cute character you have created here very smooth lines and love the small animation in there so nice job indeed, I have no changes in mind for this one, I am glad i can see your creations. you have the right Ingredients to make some of the best stuff around but anyways keep making amazing stuff

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I have no changes in mind for this one

~X~

Aster-Effect responds:

thank you very much :D
yeah, its feel good to create simple and cute animation too :3

[Magickal Kitten]

I like it

So this was interesting I like the running action mode here the signs in the upper right could have a more glow effect about it, but overall this was some nice work indeed, you have some nice talents and you showcase it well, anyways keep up the good work.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
as suggested.

~X~

Shadowcat5150 responds:

Thank you very much for the input! I agree, there's a lot of things I could have done better.

[Inktober #28 Winter G]

Really nice

So this was nice the trees are nice work here, the falling snow was a nice touch too, seems like you could have put more in the backround maybe some more trees but more in a shadow form to show even more trees beyond, but overall this was actually a nice piece and I really enjoyed this piece of art here, I really had some fun with this, anyways keep up the fantastic work.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
seems like you could have put more in the backround maybe some more trees but more in a shadow form to show even more trees beyond

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

The winter haze is a simple thing too though, everything becomes brighter and less anti-aliased. :) But yeah; I should experiment a bit more with shadow... thanks for the review!

[Inktober #29 NrG]

Nice

So this one here was something different and you did present some nice element of energy I almost felt like you could have added more color and force of the linework to represent much more energy, but I will say this was pretty interesting and a nice overall piece of nice stylish art, and great use of colors here, So keep up the amazing work here, hope to see more sometime down the roard.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I almost felt like you could have added more color and force of the linework to represent much more energy

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Hope to do more too, thank you! Agree with the sentiments in this one.

[Inktober #27 Deadeyes]

Nice eyes

Very nice work here These eyes are pretty cool and you show off some really nice detail on this one, I was really impressed with this this particular art piece reminds me a little bit of some pixel, but the art itself is pretty impressive with the use of color and outline of the eyes, I dont see any need for any changes here you have some really nice work here very detailed infact.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I dont see any need for any changes here you have some really nice work here

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Thanks :)

[Idol Hanako]

A beautiful character

Cute and sexy character the pinks in this really jump out maybe have a colored base backround or some sort of meshed backround so the colors jump out even more, So here was a beautiful character very sexy ofcourse and such an aluring look so you really push the nice smooth linework here very smooth and detailed look here a very aluring element and I love how you showcase this, so really nice character design here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
the pinks in this really jump out maybe have a colored base backround or some sort of meshed backround so the colors jump out even more

~X~

rtil responds:

thanks for all your comments and reviews, appreciated as always X. i don't always do backgrounds on sketches like this but hope you'll like the bg's in some of my more detailed pieces.

[Inktober #21 Monster City]

Nice

So this one here was really interesting I like the whole inktober I will contribute the next one but you have agood quality design here with the buildings and you even wrote a little story / poem on this one that was a nice touch, it was simple yet unique with again a style of its own and I was glad to review this work and your work once again you have some nice ideas that transcend into something unique.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Really wouldnt know where to change anything as I really like this piece as it is so for me I wouldnt change a thing.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Personally I feel like this one turned out way too simple. XD But it's cool you're embracing these as they are... in a way all artwork is really tied to the context it was created in, if everything's drawn with certain intent maybe there are no flaws, just artistic choices... or something like that.

Thanks for the review!

[Inktober #25 Friesd]

Fries

Well Fries are a killer deep fried anything is probably a killer, you have a nice texture and shading idea on this piece, I also like the small lighting shine on the front of the fries, so as for any improments I dont really think you need any on this as this was a solid piece of art and a good meaning in the way of fries are probably bad for ones health if consumed a lot, anyways nice work here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I dont really think you need any on this as this was a solid piece of art

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Hell yeah. :) Thanks