XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Funky Dude]

Funky?

I am sorry but where is the funk? He needs to be getting down to some funky fresh beats if he has the funky. I don't even know what you were going with this one, but I do like the character. He has a personality, with those lost teeth and wide eyed smile. I love all the weapons he has and the details on them. I think the thing at the bottom is tacks? I don't really know. I'd make a point to make that a little more clear when you're adding something so small, just give more details or more text for realization of what the item is. I think that the one arm is far far too long for his body. I mean, it just comes out of no-where and then his other one is kept inside. I know you wanted him to extended his arm to hold things, but it seems very off proportions compared to the other arm. I think you really need to work on body positions of the characters you create originally, but nothing too bad, just for arms in this one. I think the overall body and character you've created in nice, but I would have loved to see this in color or with a background. You would really have spiced this up from just a doodle to a nice art submission going the extra mile in detail and colorization. Overall I do like the characters that you come up with tho.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a background, add color, and fix the size of that extended arm.

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Cyberdevil responds:

Funky as in modern and stylish in an unconventional or striking way and/or strongly musty. ;)

Yupp, those are tacks! Of the Ouch TM brand. You know, you're delving into ancient work with this one, so I do know there's improvement potential but I probably won't be polishing these old ones. :) It's just fun to look back at at this point. Glad you liked the character though!

[The Grimataur]

Very nice

So this was pretty good, I like the "CREATURE" and your deigns on characters are really nice shaped maybe a more stronger glow or shine off of the knife would be nice, but anyways nice work here it was a very good art piece here with all the action in the art piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
a more stronger glow or shine off of the knife would be nice

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ShalevZohar responds:

Can't really say I designed it, it was one of DrawWithJazza's old challenges, so the idea for this monster was his. I'd take the criticism but frankly I didn't even draw scenes the last year, such a shame...
The lighting there is sloppy and I can't even see the creature with my screen brightness, but whatever, whatever makes you draw

[Love is...]

Nice Comic idea

So this was a cool "WEB-COMIC" some art detail could look smoother and fresher, So this was a nice comic idea you have here and based on the comic of review it seems pretty solid and a good creativity element about it, So "I-ENCOURAGE-YOU-TO-BUILD-ONTO-THIS" and create a great comic as you have been these web comics are pretty impressive.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some art detail could look smoother and fresher

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BbonX responds:

A very late answer, sorry
But, thanks for the tip!
I'll remake it!

[Hanna]

Very deep

So this was pretty cool I really love the deep "TEXTURES" here from the hair to the wrinkle in the clothing to the backround fainted view really some top notch work here and well perceived especially by this instant fan of your work, and hope you make more like this sometime.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe adding some lighting effect would be cool comming off the side or something.

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BiffTheTimid responds:

I check newgrounds every now and then these days, and it's pretty cool to see your review. I've been coming to the site since probably 1999 or so, before there was a portal. So I definitely recognize your user name, since you've probably reviewed other things of mine over the past 15 years or so, as well as the billion other things since you're a reviewing machine. Keep fighting the good fight my dude.

[Yoda]

Yoda YES!

That was awesome. I really love this. You really have captured him and all his glory. I do wish you had more effects in his face and body like you do in this wonderful background. I do think those stars and black sky effects are great and really give off that galaxy feeling. The face was the best part becuase you gave us classic Yoda with a small smile and a guy full of heart.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would not really change anything, maybe more effects, but great job.

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omacron6 responds:

thank you very much :)
yes, i should have out a lot more into the coloring but i was satisfied with how it looked at the time :)

[Nyarlathotep]

Very nice

Well this one was a nice work and take on Lovecraft. I do love me some Nyarlathotep the coloring was nice and the effects with lightning and things inside the creature/character was neat. I do think you have a solid piece here but I want more effects and glows and shines coming off this guy. I want more sinister interpretations and evil present in the piece. I think you could have a victim or more going on here, maybe some big burst of sun and glows in blues. I do like your talent here and I see your potential but I want more and more details inside your art, even more textures.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
It needs more textures and details and effects to really make it pop, but nice overall.

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Undeadkitty13 responds:

thanks so much and ya i see what you need, been adding a bit more details in my more recent works

[Glock Brooke]

Very nice piece

So this was cool very nice "STRUCTURE" the gun seems like it could have some shine to it and maybe more backround color design like you have now, You have the Desire to create and you are Accustomed to this style so thats why it looks so great and fantastic, As I continue this review off I can already tell this is something differant and even special in a way, So keep up the good style here as I really do like this kind of style and its always a pleasure to see stuff like this, but anywaysonto the review and stuff. you have some nice Polish aswell.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the gun seems like it could have some shine to it and maybe more backround color design like you have now

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MLeth responds:

Thanks for the feedback! The Glock generally have a pretty matte finish which means it's not very shiny (I think)

[unconscious sketch]

Amazing

Well I found this to be great piece of art and the artistic abstract methods you used with horror inside of pink was creative. I get lost in the story here. It seems like a fantasy horror of what happend when you live in a princess dream world and never clean up. The mold and trees took over and now the place is ruined! The crackes are the shattered reality of the situation. I love the full canvass art and how you did not leave any White space but got every detail in there. Overall you have a talent and I hope to see more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try out a border here but nothing to change. I like it as is.

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kittenbombs1 responds:

Thanks for the kind words. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your response.

[Violet (The Frost Maiden)]

Brilliant piece

So here was a nice artistic and "BRILLIANT" piece I love the line work here and love the "COLOR" theme you have going on here, I do think you could brighten up some of the backround color to reflect off the character more but overall this was just a beautiful art piece indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think you could brighten up some of the backround color to reflect off the character

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LeiWu7 responds:

Thanks so much! I appreciate the kind words and the feedback as well!

[Pine Apple]

Not a Pineapple

Maybe this would better be called a pinetree? I know you were doing something here for Christmas and if you changed the colors around, you may get a pineapple, but come on, this is definately a Xmas tree. I love the texture detail you've given this tree and the overall concept of it is pretty good. I love the star on top and the use of green. Now, you do need a background, that is a lot of white space, and don't say that it is snow, because I can tell it isn't. You just need something like maybe a house setting or gifts around the tree, that would improve this one, but good overall.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As I mentioned above, needs a background for sure

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Cyberdevil responds:

It's an apple that looks like a pine man, thus the pun! That really was the main point of this. A new breed of apple. Thanks for the review though!