XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[A strange easter bunny]

funny strange

~~REVIEW~~
haha this was cute, it does have a strange ness to it and all, the rabbit like creature is bouncing around with some fun ideas it seems hehe the backround seemed like it could have used abit more on the effort side but i still liked it none the less

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well i would like to see more backround work here atleast a darker tone back there somehow

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[Nigal The British Pirate]

hehe nice

~~REVIEW~~
aww this was great, has some awsome use of color not too heavy on the color either but just right i thought it might have been neater if ya showed the head just abit outa the water, and maybe abit more shine on the sword

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As stated above abit more shine on the sword and have the head showing just abit

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TheSpicanator responds:

sweet thanks man!!!

and yeah, i agree with you on both.

[Robotler]

awsome

~~REVIEW~~
Now this is neat it really just jumps out at ya, great color , awsome backrounds, and just is there to catch your attention, i think the legs could be removed as it just looks abit off but what you have here is really good

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
remove the legs and just have the body showing something about the legs are abit off

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[dun dun]

nice

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat the black and white style is neat i thought but wouldnt hurt at all with some color just abit just here and there, like spots really, but you have something good here anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some color, even if just the frames were colored it would be kinda neat

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[Carrying the Lunar Stone]

awsome detail

~~REVIEW~~
wow this character is so very well detailed, you added a good prop you had all sorts of clothing, and just gave it all the right colors, very good look you gave here love the look she has going, anyways very nice detail

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
for the extra measure add some butterfly's flying around her or something

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[FATHER TUCKER 002]

lol funny and amusing

~~REVIEW~~
hehe this was funny and very amusing. the art was fantastic there seems to be some nice gradients atleast i think its gradients, but anyways, you had just black lines to devide the boxes you should probably have double lines and or bars

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
have bars, and or double lines to devide the frame boxes

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[Mr. Bacon]

Kevin bacon

~~REVIEW~~
The drawing is superb, colors shades textures is all top notich, in my opinion it looks more like john travolta though but still has some simularities to Kevin bacon, anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
i thought the hair was abit iffy, maybe more fine hair might work in this case, well just an idea anyways

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thies responds:

Yup he doesn't look very much like Kevin Bacon on some points, espacially the eyes. He looks a bit like a mix of Kevin Bacon, John Travolta, and Ben Afflack. (like the guy below said.)

I actually tried to make the hair look more fine, but it didn't really look great, so I let it be like this..

Thanks for reviewing again :)

[to your room]

lol strange

~~REVIEW~~
haha ok this was abit on the strange side, but you really do know how to use the colors and bright ones but thats what i like, especially with these random and odd characters, so nice job there

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more funny sayings and all

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[Wandering Ghosts]

Differant and interesting

~~REVIEW~~
You have something different here i like the ghosts and all and it kinda tells abit of a story not sure why the nakedness and all, but hey it is what it is. you should add in the summery a lil story on this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more of a story on this in the summery, it will help the viewers to understand the inspiration abit more

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