XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wandering Ghosts]

Differant and interesting

~~REVIEW~~
You have something different here i like the ghosts and all and it kinda tells abit of a story not sure why the nakedness and all, but hey it is what it is. you should add in the summery a lil story on this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more of a story on this in the summery, it will help the viewers to understand the inspiration abit more

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[Elf Comic]

nice comic

~~REVIEW~~
Well now here is a differant kinda comic, i love that its not "UNIFORM" as just "BOXES" but yet its in other odd shapes and really just looks differant and unique if you ask me you should keep that style, the comic is actually pretty good nice drawings and good dialog

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
have more close ups like the eye shot

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Sangasan responds:

As I do with all art that's not mine, I have to refer you to ActionSquid, he drew it and I colored it, I personally find the dialog lame, but thanks. I think I colored it to the best of my abilities, and I agree, the eye-shot was my favorite to color.

[Red Baron]

Very impressive i like

~~REVIEW~~
Very impressive with the main character i even like what you did with another guy in the backround, this shows a good battle about to take place, and the main character has shown alot of effort on your part, so i really do look forward to more of your work, keep making great stuff for us

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Show some blood on the main guys weapon,

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beastkid7 responds:

Thanx a lot for the review! Will do sir!

[Playful Drakie]

Cute

~~REVIEW~~
now this is cute with a storybook style feel the colors and drawing itself seem very storybook style, the little story in itself with the little guy and parant show abit of story which really got it going for me, so very welldone on this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
i think i would leave this as is its just right in my opinion

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[PartyShock]

nice design

~~REVIEW~~
and here you have a nice designed character seems ready for action, i would have liked to see the character not so clean looking maybe with some battle scars and or blood in places well them are a few ideas to work with

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some blood steins like on the drill and some war scars some places

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[Water]

Very blue

~~REVIEW~~
This was very blue, maybe abit too blue maybe it could have some greens and such since it is water and water tends to be more green then blue, just that the sky makes it seem like its bluw

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add some green in there for abit of realistic colors

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[Steel Breed Issue 1 Cover!]

awsome characters

~~REVIEW~~
Wow i really love the character work here you have some very awsome and well detailed very life like, i like this poster idea but seems like the characters are all in the wrong placment

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Change the character placment abit

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[Bacon Portal]

For the Bacon

~~REVIEW~~
haha now this is my faveourite Kevin bacon day, there lots to see, and even a pig hehe bacon, i like this art piece i think it could use some

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
i would like to see more in the art piece maybe more bacon props and such all around or something

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[MILKSHAKE]

Sadam?

~~REVIEW~~
Now i think this is sadam ? but anyways great color, great drawing and kinda makes you wonder if he has abit of heart after all hehe he enjoys the shake very well drawn here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
i think its alright maybe a lil less shine on the face next time

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[Berserker Rage]

love this sketch

~~REVIEW~~
Pretty nifty sketch you have here its very detailed in the sketchness hehe, but really good stuff now all you need is some colors shades aswell as some backdrop, good luck on your next stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some shades of color and a backdrop

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TheManofSteal13 responds:

Thanks, I never thought of doing color shading before. I'll have to get photoshop to do one since I really need one anyrate. :-/

I plan to..wait. You just reminded me of a painting I did with this guy. I'll put that one up next. Thanks alot there, man! Hopefully I'll get the time to do more of these in color.