XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Go, Spidey, Go!]

Cool

Hehe well this is also my fave webslinger and i like how you made him in a funny and silly way, and him just swinging away as he should be, i like that you have an ok backround there allthough im thinking a "CITY" backround might sifice much better as it represents him somewhat better but i think you know what i mean there, the red is notbad though, nice job on the colors and texture you have here, on your character its not plain and you really made it comeout of the just plain style so nice job there, maybe you should think about making more characters in this same silly mode though and in more entertaining matters like this one you have

Now how can this be improved on well like explained a more city backround ofcourse, maybe a thug in the backround wrapped up in a web for the police, it will give the art piece more story to it

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[Hello and Welcome]

Needs more

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ok now here is something its not very much there, so not much to coment on but what there is, its cute, i do however like the "FRESH" colors and look you like whith the characters color, and such, the backrounds seem to be very bland, and there was just not enough frames, i do like the borders that were in this, now you can improve on this add some color to the frame, a bright standout color would be a nice addition, and then add something to the backrounds, aslo with the one where there is like fireworks and such you should make that more "IN YOUR FACE" so its more like a suprise, but anyways hope this review and a few of the ideas can help to improve on what you were trying to present us with, anyways good luck on your next entries

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
needs more color like in the borders, and more content in the backrounds, also more jumping out effects

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[The fastest dragon alive]

Oh that dragon

~~REVIEW~~
Yay dragons are always my fave there is just somany ways you can go with dragons and the one you have here is more of the basic kind but still you presented it very well, i think you should have put in another dragon in the "DISTANCE" now i see all these logos and names and signatures all over your work now i do understand you dont want people taking your work and all and you want advertisment, but it kinda downgrades the actual picture, couldnt you just put a "WATERMARK" somehow so that it doesnt take away the actaul art viewing, the dragon itself is pretty cute maybe you should add a trail of some baby dragons, it would be neat since the dragon was very cute like, and such, I like that you added some borders in this but you should give it more detail maybe add abit of texture to it and or make it more thick, hell i would even go as far as make some "SPIKES" along the borders so its more dragon like, well hope you liked a few of my ideas, anyways keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the border more dragon like, like i explained above, also add maybe some baby dragons and or a dragon in the distance

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[Afrika Bambaataa]

nice and purple

~~REVIEW~~
I really like the msg you had it is and can be true in many ways so really awsome effort in presenting a great msg, ok now onto the art piece, now you have a solid color in purple which i think is such an awsome color to work with, so awsome job, now while i do like purple and it looks good here it would have been nice with another color like a blueish and have them work together somehow, i think this could also use some "FRAMES / BORDERS" maybe if you kept this purple them go with a deep dark purple for the frame and or borders around the edges, makes it feel more like a poster type of thing, just an idea though, aslo you should think about making the canvas larger so you can add more to the msg and or other art images, just gives it more depth, another idea that may help improve on something alreay good. also i like the guys glasses i could see you making them really bright to make a little nice effect for this image, but other then that it was a nice piece, hope to see some more work from you soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some frames borders would be nice, also adding anew color along with the purple would be nice, and you could probably add alot more msg and other images if the canvas was larger

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J-qb responds:

Thanks for the thorough critique; Its very much appreciated.
As for the canvas size; the contest required that the entries were 550*400 pixels (this one is double the size) so I couldnt really make it much bigger.
Thanks though!

[Asari Escort Or Assassin?]

Nice 3d

~~REVIEW~~
Nice "3d" Rendition of the Asari's, not sure i have seen much of that on here, i do like your picks of the colors, "RED" over the blue, it is a nice mixture of colors and match nicley, so nice job there, as for the backrounds, it was very "SCI-FI" not so sure that fits too much, might have been better if it was more "JUNGLE" backrounds, the backrounds you have remind me more of something outa starwars or something, but as for the character design notbad good color tone, nice design the clothing was good, allthough the lower half body seems abit too revealing, but thats just me also, but still nice detail on the clothing and once again nice use of color, as for the face features it doesnt look all that "LIFE-LIKE" maybe due to the 3d but other then that its not a bad art piece. keep up good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
a few things but i would start off with the less revealing of certain body parts, but not too much to not take away from your art piece, i would change the backround to something more like a jungle or something

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[Samyu]

Love the red hair

~~REVIEW~~
Wow now this was a really intense drawing here, i am in love with this girls red hair, its an outstanding drawing and sketch as you say, her "NAILS" seem too long if you ask me, that one "THUMB" one especially, it might be the only blemish in this drawing as this was welldone even if you dont think so yourself, but really its an awsome piece of work and ill add this to my faves, now as some extra "DETAIL" like maybe give her a few tatoo's here and there, it will reflect on the dark theme you have going in this one, my fave part of this art piece was the red hair and the fine detail, now i like the "CLOUDS" around the legs but it might look much better if it was, more all around her so like a vampire she is coming out of it somehow, anyways nice art piece here, i really liked this one and i will add it as my fave

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
have more clouds around, add some tattoos, and maybe clean up the nails abit as it looks odd

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zigan responds:

Thanks for the review and kind words. I did want to add more tattoos but was running out of time, and for the fact I didn't want her body to look too cluttered. Thanks for the fave as well. ^^

Also thanks to everyone so far for the comments. :)

[Rogue and IronMan in the Bar]

Awsome detail

~~REVIEW~~
Awsome detail, first off props to you on some awsome detail and great effects, seems like you can work abit better with effects on iron man hehe, he has lots of glow points, his "EYES" i thought could have had more of a glow from his eyes or to really change it up you could have had them glow red or green, as for the "BACROUNDS" i thought you could have done abit better its not bad or anything just seems slightly "BLAND" maybe it should have something going on there, it looks like they are having drinks so maybe they are in a bar so why not have other drinkers in the backround. and on another note the whole canvas seems abit small, i wouldnt mind seeing a more larger one maybe with a few other drinkers in this scene and such, just to give it that full bar scene if thats what it is, but in anycase it needs more characters i think, anyways good art piece here, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more characters either in a larger canvas, and or in the backrounds, add some more glows to iron mans eyes or even put your own twist on it

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[Jungle Madness]

Nice style here

~~REVIEW~~
Kinda like a comic book, well alot like a comic book, now my question is this the same guy cause you have two differant character versions there, now as it seems to be a comic book cover i am thinking it would look cool if it had some snazzy borders frames around it somehow, just might give it that little extra comic feel and touch, the hair in both versions could use abit more depth some sorta detail that shows its layers abit morre would be nice, also i like how you have the two differant guys and such but i am thinking there should be more stuff happing in the backround, kinda to really show that this would be the comic i want to read and such, regardless of all this and that you have some good art showing and a good rendition of a comic i really like this and thought it cameout well, so props and nice job on this, looks great.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The hair in both versions could use abit of detail, some "FRAMES/BORDERS" along the edges of your art piece might give it a more focused look and this piece just seems like it would look more complete with borders/frames, some more backround happenings could be in place aswell

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[Digimon Fans are Really Hot]

It is cute

~~REVIEW~~
WOW this was pretty damn good, you are very "BOLD" you showed lots of "SKIN" in this one but i suppose that was sorta the idea but you did dress here up abit it is a her i think lol, but anyways onto the review, the character design was very welldone almost perfect, there was alot of skin but i like how you dont really show much of what would be "RAUNCHY" but anyways good design good colors also nice job on the shadow just there on the back of the shirt it reflected well, you also presented us with some good backrounds, all and all you have some awsome skills that really brought out a unique character with awsome shades and details, if anything could work even better i would give the "EYE" on the head piece a bit of a "GLOW" it would set it just perfect i think, maybe even have someone peeking an eyefull in the backround hehe, ohwell nice job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
put a glow effect on the eyeball on the head piece, and maybe have another character in the backround peeking an eyefull or something

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Tootmania responds:

Thanks for the neato review! And that's actually a cool idea, the whole glowing eyeball helmet thing. And thanks for the kind words!

[Rise Before the Fall]

wow very nice

~~REVIEW~~
Wow this was really nice, you have the fighter showing some "ACTION" like if she is in battle and thats neat cause that shows emotion and a story from the picture, the "COLORS" are not too standout but more fitting to the events in the art, so props on that, the hands dont show much, but i would probably do the same, you should think about giving her some "WAR-MARKS" on her arms or skip points so that it seems like she has been in battle before, and on that note a tattoo wouldnt hurt heh, anyways nice job here i like this character and she grew on me as i wrote this so, props to you on some good character design here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add some war wounds on her skin maybe some blood stains on her armor, and a tatoo or two wouldnt hurt

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