XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Exploited view]

Better i thought

~~REVIEW~~
and here are some better pieces with more of the visuals more detailed then the one with the logo and all, it all seemed to be a work in progress as there was lots of parts that really needed to work together, i have really enjoyed reviewing these as i love to see how things work, but awsome job all around here very nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think Some sorta crazy backround like a rainbow warp in the backround would really show off the pieces in a better light.

~X~

[Cheese Grater Use Manual]

Interesting

~~REVIEW~~
Ok here was more of the one of the final version, and here you show lots of differant versions everything in this one seems to be just everywhere and doesnt show much of each part as the big "LOGO" is also blocking the way, but anyways it was alright.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would remove the logo so you can the actual 3d abit more in detail and such.

~X~

[Easy Cheese Grater]

Neat 3d

~~REVIEW~~
Now this is interesting something differant and the 3d style is pretty neat i thought, Kinda differant from your side of things and seems like you put lots of effort in these so that was pretty neat, as a cheese grater i guess there is not much you can do there but its still interesting, i think if you had a view portion of it grading some cheese it might be pretty interesting aswell, just an idea for more of an effect of the grater and such, really there is not too much to comment on this but i did find it pretty neat, so maybe more effects next time like the actual cheese and such.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As suggested an effect like cheese coming out would be something neat.

~X~

[The Masks we wear]

The mask

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so here is something differant, in this one you give off a good msge, anout hiding behind a mask because we need to be a certain way for the public eye, so for the meanning i really got and thought it was pretty neat how you put this through art, as for the "ART" it was very good, nice group of shades, very fresh looking not dark and detailed but just something more fresh looking and that works out, also liked the back writings aswell allthough you cant see them all, it is still well presented to flow woth everything here, so nice job here, Now as for improving on something like that, not sure as you have once again covered all your bases, but if i was going to suggest anything at all, i would have a "TEAR" on the guy behind the mask as to show abit of emotion, that could really show off the meaning abit more and what you are trying to get across, and just an idea aswell, As for your "SIGNATURE" you could have it look abit more "FANCY" as it looks too squished together, anyways hope that helps and once again great piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I mentiond an idea of a tear on the guy as to show more emotion, and also making the signature look more fancy and more spread out as to read abiit better

~X~

Manuel-Dangelo responds:

Thanks.
And by the way. I don't cry any more. I think I'm out of tears since I was 10 years old.

[I-bot Reinterpretation]

I-Boot complete

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so its been awhile since i have reviewed any of your work, but i was glad to see you finally finished this guy, took you awhile but seems like its all done. and here in the final version you have trully made him complete with all out color in the backround, and shine and shaded areas, so the shades on this have seemed to really comeout well and i was pretty impressed with the final version here, i like it how it seems his head is just popping out of his body, that adds abit to his cuteness and all, I love the "SHINE" you gave to one end, while still giving some shows to the otherside, and with the backround you really put fourth the color and it just reflected well with the lighter tones of the robot itself, so all and all a very welldone robot and completion to the I-BOT something that i had totally forgot about, so nice job indeed on this, Now as to improve, im not sure you have covered alot of the bases and really made this an awsome piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe the bottom end of his gun shoould have some paint stains or something to show he has been paininting, just a thought though

~X~

[Won't You Be My Neighbor]

Unique

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm ok well this was very good i thought, i do see the effort you put into this, and you do have some good artistic value in this, kinda like a doll but then not, you really gave it a "SOFT" feel aswell that really brought out the unique side of this, now with all that said, i did really enjoy this it has some great detail and great effort on your side of things, I see you have a mask on there i would think about taking that off, and if its not a doll and say a real person, maybe you could have a "TEAR" and that would give this piece some emotion, it tells a story about this and what it can be or what it is, but really great job on putting that effort fourth, as to improve on this, not sure, i did mention no mask and adding a tear, and maybe even showing more of a "FULL BODY" for the extra touch of this, and i would go as far as even putting some scars on the body then even maybe some glowing eyes in the distance, just a few ideas to really spice things up on this, So anyways great piece, hope to see more great work from you.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentions, a tear, more emotion like maybe if it could be a person, some other detail touches here and there in the backround, something along them lines

~X~

[Shield (Orange)]

Entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
Ok wow this was really impressive and has to be your best work, it certainly is one of my faves of the day, i really like how you changed a dull color "ORANGE" and made it look really good, probably the black over the orange just works so well, as for the design of the shield i thought it was welldone with some good detail, and shows lots of effort, I like the shades within the shield, and you just thought this one out very well, so i was impressed with that portion of this great art piece, Now the backround i thought you could have done much better, the white just seems too bland, you could have had a "SHADED" grey and it might also bring the picture out more without taking any focus away from the main piece here, but anyways a great piece of art here, good colors and a good design, So all and all, another great piece i enjoyed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the white backround, more greish, and that might be it its pretty good though.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Thanks for the review, glad ya liked it!

[Only Human]

An interesting image here

~~REVIEW~~
Now with this one seems like you went all out, you have lots of color and even borders and frames, thats something i try and tell others about, and here you have really presented that, I like it how you didnt kill it with color either, but you really had some in there and some not colored, so that was pretty neat, i like the style with this as the linework was pretty impressive and again it all came together so really nice job once again, Now this had a sorta meaning to it and thats what i also liked about it, with the bottle and such, i think you should have had the bottle colored with some portion of color for the soda amount or whatever it was, it was notbad at all, and i had another pleasure of reviewing this, another pleasent piece, if anything can be improved i would add a touch of backround color but not too much, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just a tint of shade in the backrounds, and some more tint color in the bottle were the liquid cuts off.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Thanks for the long review X!

[Merry Christmas]

Pleasent

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm now this was interesting, it seems to work for the holidays and the theme you were going for, i like all the design and bright colors i thought, seemed very pleasent,, and just right, it was abit artistic and had all these colors just really made for an awsome piece, i like the light beams coming down, and what i really liked about this was the, Differant colors and how they all flowed into eachother giving the next, a much new feel then the last, really great stuff all around i thought, Would have been nice if you added some town and people down there somehow would make it even more pleasent, so all and all, a good piece here nice and pleasent colors that all blended well together, and overall i give this an A+ So nice job indeed, i Really liked it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would ad some people a town and show them in there jolly way.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Yeah, people would be a good addition, thanks for the review!

[Suffer No Guilt]

Fantastic design and detail

~~REVIEW~~
and wow this was as awsome as they can get i suppose, so much "DETAIL" from the eyes to the horns and lots of fine detail here and there it all just really flowed as one but there are somany pieces, i even noticed that the horns were almost transformed into like moons, now with this one on the color seems if like a fresher color tone was used then in the other ones, but again and you will probably hear this alot from me but ad another bit of color to have more focus on it, but you are on the right track with the amount of detail and effort you put on, anyways verywell done here. So improvments would be to ad some color maybe some bright reds and or blues as explained for some focus since there is so much all around and such. anyways once again nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well again i suggested some color just a tad here and there.

~X~

Jakubias responds:

Roger that! Thanks for pulling the effort to actually write something with sense, I appreciate it!