XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pantoran Jedi]

Pretty nifty

~~REVIEW~~
ok very impressive with this one, now it has a mixture of starwars and avatar in the mix, the backround was too simular in color though with the skin tone maybe a differant backround tone, so that it doesnt mix in somehow, she needs abit more detail on the boots maybe more black type, and some shiny stuff on legs wouldnt hurt either, other then that it was pretty good. maybe also give more focus on the moon aswell more brighter somehow, anyways this was pretty good if you ask me but could be better, anyways untill next time, good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
change the backround somehow as the skintone and backround were just too simular,

johngoldenwolf responds:

THank you. :) Most appreciative of the critique.

[Na]

Nice use of color

~~REVIEW~~
I just love the use of color in this one and you presented some good "SHADING" also like the color with hair eyes and eyebrows, that was kind of a nifty idea, also great job on using the whole canvas allthough some of the backround you could have used, and one last point that may or may not help but ill throw it in there anyways maybe some extra shading on the skin tone for the extra detail but doesnt seem like it needs it, anyhow its a great portrait. anyways keep up the decent art works.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some extra shading on the skin tone and maybe a touch of backround in the bland backround spots.

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Grigoro responds:

Now I know what's wrong with this picture.
Big thanks to you :)

[Dark Hand]

Decent art piece

~~REVIEW~~
Good hand bloodies at that and thats an eye so that was pretty cool you did give it the whole feel of creepy and as a desktop that was a neat idea, now im thinking you could add abit more there too much darkness, maybe if it were two hands it would be ok but needs something more, maybe more blood even and the dark blood you have is pretty good if you ask me, because the desktop icons would still be ok over that backround, maybe even some sorta borders would work. anyways good art piece here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could be larger in scale, and more blood splatters around, even a border would work.

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[Determination]

Pretty decent

~~REVIEW~~
The character were was well done i like the "LIGHT" feel of stuff, light tone colors and inked even that, now the backround was ok but i thought you could have done something more then just white maybe some backround seen or if you want the "WHITE" go with some sorta mystic clod in the backround that way it doesnt take away from the actual character but also gives the whole canvas used, i wouldnt mind seeing more shades aswell in the jacket you can still give more shades while still keeping it on the light drawing feel.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So a few suggestions to improve are some sorta backing besides the white maybe a coud, and possibly darke shading on the jacket

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[Self Portrait]

Decent

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat, the faceial features look pretty good, just a portrait but lookd pretty good now there could be improvment in alot of areas for one making the whole portrait much larger, maybe even adding some shades in theskin tone, but everything seemed to be right on with those small changes, could be much better and have a better outcome, so overall i liked it and it was a decent job, so nice work here i do hope to see more of your work soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned above, a larger creation base, and some more textute and shading in skin tone,

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[Love in the Air]

Pretty good stuff.

~~REVIEW~~
this was very cute, the color the hearts the detail and the character with some backround effects cameout pretty good i thought, as i look at your art piece i cant really see anything to improve on so i would leave it as is, so i was pretty impressed with the outcome, and look forward to more, so as a last note great art great use of color awsome character and yes theres lots of love, good art piece here i look forward to seeing more, anyways nice job. anyways good luck on your next piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So great piece, nice color awsome detail, its perfect as is.

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KeiKuzco responds:

thanks dude

[Scarecrow]

Very dark very impressive

~~REVIEW~~
now this was nice, its abit on the "DARK" side but i guess thats what you were going for, and thats great you really bringout the realistic feel of this, love the black darkness in the backround really gives off that real feel aswell, the texture and look of it was also so very really and thats a good thing on your part of it, if anything can be improved maybe "LIGHT" up the "EYES" with some sorta glow or something, besides that you did a fantastic job on this whole piece, hope to see more from you soon.

~~OVERALL~~
ad some lighting or glow effects from within the eyes

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[Kelly Killing Necromorphs]

Nice use of color

~~REVIEW~~
nice piece here it shows lots of "ACTION" and i love the color "TONES" changing from one to the next that was actually a pretty good idea and makes it much more neat that way, the drawings them self of the battle and characters are pretty awsome show lots of detail and great designs on them so very good on this piece i really liked this one, if any suggestions are made in this review to improve on, maybe you could use more lighting effects like the gun "SHOOTING" brighten them up abit, anyways great piece you have here.

~~OVERALL~~
could use more lighting effects, on the gun ray for example.

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DarkVisionComics responds:

Its fine how it is for the most part, I do agree,I could of did the lighting effects on her face from the glow of the gun and glow onto the necromorph she's fighting, but the gun isn't shooting, she's just aiming at a limb . Thank you though! :} She loves it, I love it, I got paid for it. Good stuff. Thank you again!

[Hey Honey]

Decent

~~REVIEW~~
hehe ok i must admit i did get a funny "LAUGH" from this one, allthough i was confused i should have started on the first one, but here we are at (#5) now this comic is notbad, the color was ok but maybe some "DEEPER" colors and such? maybe more frames then you have aswell, dont get me wrong this was decent but has room for improving i enjoyed it regardless, so untill next time keep up the decent art, one one last note the art in paticular was pretty welldone so again props to you there, good luck on your next piece of artwork.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So a few things i said like, more deeper colors, more frames, more dpth and more going on ofcorse.

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