XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Meta Knight]

This was cool

I like this I think a few things you could change up on it to help and improve on things first would be a larger canvus, You could make a Larger Canvas so that you could ad much more stuff and beable to show off some fine detail that you may have not been able to before, on the size you do use, it makes for some better results on the art as a whole. and have the "SWORD" flame more with a glow about it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A glow on on sword and a larger canvus.

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[3monstersNsomealiens]

Very Nice

Very nice detail in this one, I like the creativity in this one you really show some nice detail, you should think about running this through photoshop or something and enhance it with some nice effects and such would be much better visually if you did. just an idea to try out.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
think about running this through photoshop or something and enhance it with some nice effects

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[Sketchbook Phoenix]

Beautifull

Wow this was a beautiful bird, I really like the light colors is that "PENCIL" anyways really nice lines soft colors very elegant and just came out so beautifull, this was a nice piece, I honestly dont think any changes should be made to it but If I was going to make any changes I would, make it on a larger canvus so you can see even all of the wings and all and show its beauty that, but anyways nice work here.

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I would, make it on a larger canvus so you can see even all of the wings and all and show its beauty, like the wings and all. just an idea of improvement.

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[Harley Quinn]

Very Nice

I love Harley Quinn, this girl is just perfect in my eyes. I love the cuteness you use here with her facial expression, the slight wink and tongue on the side is very much her. She teases and torments. I like that you went with the more recent movie Harley as that one gives you more to work with in colors. The shadows and shades are all very good and the multi-colored background really lets her colors shine through with that blur effect letting you focus mainly on her in the foreground. You have a really interesting piece of art here, it has some creative and artistic looks, and I really came to enjoy this and all that it was worth, so as I do start this review I look forward to every detail and curve made here. and sofar you have done an awsome job with this piece. And with all that said, I did have a pleasure it reviewing this as it was a nice work of art and had some parts that could be made to look better but overall I found this whole piece to be pretty good, so keep at it and keep making stuff like this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think the only thing to improve on is that text "DADDYS LIL MONSTER" on her shirt. It isn't flowing right to me, maybe warp it around a bit. It sits too straight and not skewed enough.

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[Woblat Doesn't Know]

Purple madness

So this was actually a cute little monster you have created and the eyes are just oh so cute, love the horns I actualy think with some slight shine on the horns you can make it stand out more, maybe even on the eyes too but overall this was a really good design and nice blend of colors too so nice job.

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I actualy think with some slight shine on the horns you can make it stand out more

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[Get the doodle going]

Very nice and detailed

Wow I must say this one was pretty detailed and very well done the detail alone is just amazing this is one of those peices that should be colored, even partially colored would be a huge plus here, I really like what you have done here, But please do ad some color it would be very awsome.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could use some color

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[Flapjack]

Oh loli pop

Haha I really love the loli pop eyes that was really creative, I feel that the actual canvus or size of it all should be bigger maybe the baby a tad smaller, but this was pretty good stuff, you have a good cute piece of art and love the use of color here.

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I feel that the actual canvus or size of it all should be bigger maybe the baby a tad smaller

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[656554654654546546555654654]

REAL

Wow very real, gritty, and speaks to me. The pain here and overall exposure of the human body really shines out in this piece. The eyes tell a story and the body does too. The use of red really brings out that "PAIN" aspect of the art and makes you feel interested and sympathetic to the creation. The eyes coloring of red really draws you in to them and work
well with the overall piece, more so the size of the eyes and the pain you can see in the face especially in those cracks under the eyes. The way the head isnt quite on or the arms moving around give this character and makes you wonder what they experienced or what you've been dealing with. Normally I'd say add more of a background but the burning like effect you have here really covers a lot of the picture so it doesn't really need to be added but maybe a full red or full fire background would add to this. You are a very black/white artist with some color but I think maybe try around with backgrounds and see if they suit you. Otherwise this is great art here. Alright so here is another fine piece of art, it is intriging yet somewhat dry but i still think its the kind of unique style that I have come to enjoy from artists like yourself, There are Unlimited possibilities that you can do here and with some more creative ideas. anyways good job on this piece and future pieces. We for sure need more artists like yourself that bring out the best in pieces like this, This has a nice blend of srtistic styles and Radiates with your own style aswell, so props to you for such a unique piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing really but maybe a different background or play around with backgrounds.

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shittingpie responds:

Thank you so much for your kind words I really appreciate your thoughtful and constructive criticism! Thanks for your time and Yessss I might have to experiment with some backgrounds in future! Thanks agen :D

[New Year]

Entertaining

An entertaining piece here the comic style is at its best when you bring a new entry about, and this one is just as good, I do love the effort and detail you show us in this one and the end results of the story are always some crazy funny thing and all together its a great entry so nice job here indeed. ad some backround detail in this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as mentioned ad some props and such in the backround.

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[Brainstorm]

Awsome

Another awsome piece that you bring us here in the audio portal and I must say this one was pretty impressive love how this story plays out and does pretty well from start to finish, dont think you could make it better but its a good story so keep up the good work. Now the comics are really comming alive and that extra adde color is awsome.

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Really good stuff here and love that extra color you should ad color to the header also.

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