XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Experimentation]

Another nice piece here

So you have some good creative stuff here I like the group of charchters but you could really put more detail and effort in the background as it needed it just a little more but anyways nice work here just ad to the background other then that this was pretty cool

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background work

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[Transformation]

Nice

This is kind of like a zombie comming at you well that what I got from it but it was pretty good nice action scene you have here I like pose and the background was filled so that was pretty nice work there anyways good charchter good work very nice stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not really anything with this one

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[Old to new]

Nice idea

This was a good idea I like the old and new the new looks really good and you have a good possibility on them so nice job there and a nice element of things on this there could still be some background work and detail and some props anyways good job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background work ofcourse

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[The son and The nightmare]

Really nice

This was cool I like the character work here and the birds and flame was a nice touch of things and you really have a talent at this with some more designs might even be a good tip and such maybe have the flames glowing or something but anyways nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glow on the flame and even bird

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[Remember]

Very nice

So I like this and have to say your charchter work is well done and you have really improved from 2015 to now and beyond as I review your work I can see the improvments but as for a tip on this one I could see you adding some background detail and design in the background

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background work maybe some design even

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[Ame-kun]

Cool

So this was cool and another nice piece of art with a decent charchter and a decent pose even you have some nice work here I like the background but seems like the background could use more details and props it was lacking maybe a lamp a table some pictures etc

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some props and details in the background

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[Madeline]

Wow

The color is beautiful the portrait is very beautiful the style is intense and the lighting is just perfect this is another one where you can ad some borders on this like purple to match the hair so nice job there very good art work here hope to see more soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some purple borders

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[Self Portrait]

Beautiful

Now this was beautiful I absolutely love the lighting you presented it very well the darkness also makes it work well so nice job indeed very artistic a very nice style here love the lighting effect more of all I think you should have went with red borders

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some red borders would be nice

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[Natsuki (Illustrated)]

Very beautiful

So this was really beautiful I live the detail and look of this I think you adding some shine to the hair and sword would be pretty key on this one you did some nice work and some fine lines to form a good charchter very well done here I like your work it's just good to see quality work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine in hair and even sword

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[Lovely Love]

Very nice work

Seems like your shading and detail has come full circle and looks much better but I like your work here love the improved shades and such and I think you could do something with the background as it was dark maybe some lighting beam in background of them or some color design

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background design or lighting effects

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