XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Newgrounds in Metroidvania]

Awsome

Well first off congrats on the front page well deserved for all the time you put in on this and wow you put a lot of people in this one lots of great energy in all the different screens and mock ups really a beautiful sight and glad I got to review this piece of yours you have really made me have a new admiration for Sprite work and the effort that goes into them so props to you for all the hard work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes as this was a beautiful insight on all the Sprite detail and energy

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[HIGH KICK]

Very nice

So this was another cool character combo you have here some really good poses lots of detail and nice linework really nice effort that background is notbad either it has some lighting but I think you should ad some more dominant lighting coming down to that would be a nice idea but anyways nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more lighting effect

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[Groovin']

Cool

So this was cool I like her groovy style the hair is really cute maybe you should think about adding some shine in the hair and also maybe some background detail like a disco ball since she is dancing it's just a small idea but might work well but overall a good drawing you have here anyways keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background work and shine

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[FBI agent]

Very nice

And here was something cool a nice simple drawing with some now classic character work the shooting on the FBI was great I think you should have had more bullet holes or even more cracks in the logo and also some shine on the agents glasses wouldn't hurt either but other then all that mentioned this was cool

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few things mentioned

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[the blue knight!]

Very good

Well this was very good and very impressive here with this style a beautiful visual with the ice I think you need more of a power and slash on the ice maybe some added sparkle to the ice as it's slashed and congrats on the awards here we'll deserved and hope you win many more to come your way

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More sparkle and slashing in the slash moment

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[castle crashers vs. barbarians]

Another cool piece

So this here was another cool piece I live this in battle scene you have going on maybe a more intense action scene would have been cool two things I would have added would be some sparkle on the sword and more background element props and such that's just my take on it besides that this is a top notch piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some sword shine. And some background detail

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[floppyjaw toof]

Amazing

Wow pretty amazing work the art is simple and a good fun character and you had hands on work and voice so that has to be a plus you always do amazing work but to have a more simple character and detail is always a plus I think the only thing I would add to this might be some frame or borders on edges of canvus

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some borders and or frames to accent the character here

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[PLOXINATOR 5]

Very intense

Wow I have to say this was very intense piece you have here the detail is very deep so much detail it's sick so very nice skills here must have took you a long time to create this regardless it's intense now all you need is some background theme or color or element back there even a simple design would work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background detail or pattern if some related matter

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[ALIEN Hominid - NG Art Contest]

Wow nice

Wow really nice work here the yellow mux if hominid and alien is a good idea and the yellow texture and shade is really nice my take on this might be adding that same yellow colortones with a frame along the edges just to match up with the alien theme and that's just an idea overall this was pretty well-done

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[Chainsaw the Pumpkins]

Always amazed

I am always amazed at your work the colors for one are so sharp and crisp not to mention so deep in texture and you really do bring the shine out the form and poses of the characters really perfect spots and the expression among other little details here and there just a beautiful piece here I would ad some more glow to the pumpkin

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More glow to the pumpkin

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