XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Newgrounds Musical]

Haha nice

So this was cool the details are a tad bit foggy but you have some nice skills and I like the dark elements here almost even black and white flavor but the visual is cool and makes sense it would be a musical you bring forward some nice little details here and there and some nice effects I think some added brighter colors could really bring this out even

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more vibrant and brighter colors

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[mecha-mammoth mayhem!]

Pretty amazing

So this was a nifty piece especially for a robot day you have some really nice talent not just this piece but most of your entries as for this one it was really cool and well designed you could see I think some added shine and sparkle on metal and fire power action scenes would be a plus on things anyways nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added sparkle and shine as mentioned

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[chilling]

Very cool

So I like this and I'm becoming a fan of yours as I review through some of your work this looks like a good scene you had some decent expression on these characters and it shows off well so nice job indeed the darkness in background needs some sort of lightning source and some back wall back there

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background detail like a wall and lighting source

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[Ibon]

Cool piece

So here was another fine art piece now for one I do love the colors and how bright they are I don't think you should go as bright on the yellow of the eyes and I do think you adding more blood like on a background wall type of thing would represent the blood more and the chaos besides that this was cool

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More blood like in background and less neon colored eyes

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[dank forest]

Another cool one

So here you have more amazing work at good adorble little creature you have here the smoking was ok but maybe more smoke and the background maybe more detail in the background somehow like with more efforts in small props and trees and such but that's my take on things and hope you make more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background tops like other animals and trees and maybe more smoke lingering about

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[Trasriel]

Cool

So this was cool I like this charchter and it's nice to see more full charchter work like this from artists I wish more artists would do more full charchter work but glad you did now of course you should ad some background detail on this and make a full art piece here it's a beautiful design here anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background work ofcourse

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[kitty boy]

Good eye

You have a good eye for detail it's all the color and stylish detail that I see in this like the different colors and the stylish expression on the girls face now one thing I would love to see is some background work while it's not much there you could ad some props and detail maybe some backdrop scene of the characters world

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backdrop scene or world

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[Papyrus and his traps...]

Very nice

So this was pretty cool I really like the idea of all the traps the Sprite work is as always a great pace of quality and you bring a sense of enjoyment when these come to a complete moment these are just amazing pieces of work so please do keep doing more of these great mock ups and I'll look forward to more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would ad even more traps and some sparkle on all the ends of the metal points just an idea or two

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[Geeeettttttt Dunked On!]

Amazing

So this was an amazing piece it's a game over logo piece and looks pretty good I really like how you pushed the idea up front and in your face with the character you really do have a sense of balance in these pieces and just an overall great showcase of talent so nice effort and love the energy you bring

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A tad bit more color in this would be cool

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[Angry Zinger Leader King of Swings]

Brilliant

This here is pretty brilliant I like this and love the whole bumble bee element you have some awsome talent and you bring an extra level of excitement to the portal I love the use of colors you bring and love the style within the detail so nice work indeed and hope you keep making us great stuff as this one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some dripping honey somehow

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