XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Fertile Grounds]

Another beautiful piece here

So this painting practice you do is really some beautiful work you really have some nice details here and it all seems to come alive on things very nice indeed I really like the effort and energy you bring the lighting effects on this are just amazing very deep love the artistic style that you presented here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes on this beautiful piece

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[Morticia]

Wow beautiful

Now this was some beautiful work you have here really nice and really beautiful the hair and her expression is just very real and deep you really bring out the details like the background the candles in the background could be glowing a little more with a bit of sparkle in the distance anyways nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added sparkle to candles

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[Inside the heart]

Red

So there's lots of reds in this one maybe too much at times but then as I look at it you seem to separate the character from the background and really make that backround work I would throw in more lighting behind her to offset that red just a tad but overall this was pretty good and a nice piece here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more lighting behind charchter

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[SpeedPaint: Forever Ago]

Very nice

So this was pretty cool with some nice background detail not sure what you do with the background detail but it's pretty impressive with the color and just looks really good the characters are in perfectly posed moment and show off some good expression so all in all a very nice piece here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some sunlight beating down on them

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[Inktober #10]

Still?

I wonder what you think is still? I like the open-endedness of this piece of "INKTOBER". I think you made me think and wonder what is going on and that is always nice with art. You get a sense of "MYSTERY" and wonder with art sometimes and you think. oh I think this is what he means, but then someone else can say a different interpretation. It is all good for communication and admiration of the art forms. I love the font here, once again, that font is your strong skill. I think the white space could be less, I do find the more white space the less focus you have on the main art or you can add more of a background to this to elimit the amount of white space. I think that overall you have talent with the ink style of the art world and I hope you keep it up, this was good job and good use of your skills.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would use less white space and crop this up or maybe add more of a background as I stated above but I do like this.

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Cyberdevil responds:

Still going with the Inktober pieces... maybe? ;) And Still as in: just standing there. Still. Wonder if I had any deeper message here hmm... always nice with art that can be interpreted many ways indeed, though considering this was one of my quicker pieces I am a bit surprised with the four stars here, versus three point fives on the others. Anyway thanks for the reviews! Always a pleasure to read. And motivation.

[Roxy Style]

Fantastic group

And here we have a "SILLY" and toony group here very fresh looking and welldone once again, the backround seems like it needs some color added though, A fantastic design of a character here you bring out the best in character work even in some of the best poses you have here, some really nice form of lines and alurring tones, but anyways really nice work detail, so nice work indeed, and hope you make many more great stuff like this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the backround seems like it needs some color added though

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[Hello Roxy!]

Another great character

Cool its "ROXY" not sure who she is but she looks well done and has two little "ADMIRERS" with here, so your character or character work is always amazing if its not the lines its the detail within the lines and you seem to make it all come together in a full fledged detail, so nice effort here and hope you keep making great characters and beautifull lines such as this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would darken up the borders a tad bit.

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[Roxy Z]

Awsome

A group of one "CHARACTER" here very nice I love all the poses in this one, seems like you could ad more frame work on this one around each character and edges of whole canvus piece, So this was pretty awsome the characters as always great form and always alurring and a nice style you have here very good detail, the lines are smooth as can be and I would for sure love to see more like this as this was a good art style but then again you always bring good quality about.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
seems like you could ad more frame work on this one around each character and edges of whole canvus piece

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[Inktober #9]

Sad but good

This one was a good art work here but it seems this one is a bit sad, like the way you have the head positioned on the body of this man, that position screams that of someone who is very "SAD". I feel like the snow is inside the umberalla too. You have all the "COLORING" going behind him, maybe that isn't the intension, but that is what I am getting out of this. I think the white space is okay, but there is a lot of it. I would crop this one and all more textures of the snow or maybe those textures more dark and vibrant in color. I do like the man and the way he looks, even if he is being sad. I think it tells a story here and you wonder what he has been dealing with or will deal with. Overall a good piece of art, not sure why you didn't let a vote happen for this one, but good job and good use of your skills. I hope you keep your inktober going for a long while.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would use less white space and crop this one a bit, maybe add more snow lines and details

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Cyberdevil responds:

Hmm yeah, the white puffs inside the umbrella were meant to be background cloud, but I do see how that bit's a bit misleading. Main motive might've looked better a bit bigger, I suppose, if I did keep the white all white. Feel like I'd probably botch the impression if I started adding texture, but maybe something to experiment with hmm... thanks for reviewing! Hope to get going with Inktober this year too. Time's closing in fast.

[Patreon: Corrupted Intentions]

Very nice work

Cool effects, I think the floor shoyld be "DARKER" so that the "PUDDLE" shows off more visually, And here we go some nice work you have done here some cool characters but then again alot of your work is pretty amazing, the detail and energy you put in your details of the characters really comes out, so keep making more character work such as this one, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
darker backing and grorund so puddle doesnt intertwine with simular color backing.

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