XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Inktober #12 5 Second Challenge]

Simple

So this was cool I like the simple nature of this one and it seems to be another one of your faster drawings, this time at 5 seconds. I think for 5 seconds this is actually pretty decent but too simple. I think you could have set the background color quick to be blue and then did a bit of green on the bottom portion. I bet you could save time by not signing the piece to give it a little extra. I mean, for a 5 second drawing, do you really need to have the signature?

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background effort and detail

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Cyberdevil responds:

The signature's excluded in the time above, as mentioned. :) Just feels like it's a signature thing, you know? Glad you're appreciating even these rushed ones!

[Father's Day]

Very entertaining

Very nice wouldnt mind some color though or a little bit, What I love the most about these are that you can make them entertaining even with this one started out average but you really bring a climax to it making it pretty fun and entertaining so I thank you for that effeort and energy that you bring across the table. so keep it real and keep making these awsome pieces.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
wouldnt mind some color though or a little bit

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[Metal Detector]

You have a good Envision

haha great joke here and well executed I love your envision on this piece you make a simple thing look great, And basicly with this episode you made these characters really jump into action with this one, the story really comes out well, And Im impressed not just with this but with everything you do to make this a success.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
these jokes are really good you should really make more extended jokes like this

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[The Gas N' Gouge]

This was nifty

I like the perspective of this and all the "VIBRANT" colors it really made it look very nice, all the little details also look very good made it look like a real world and was pretty nice and nifty so nice job on this one, hope you make more stuff like this one very nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
very nice work here didnt find anything at all that really needs any changes on this one.

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[Inktober #18 Cryptic Ink]

Very nice work here

Well I was really pleased with this piece the leet moris code was nice to see after all these years, and the way you included the pen itself was a nice detail that gave it some depth and realistic appeal. The only thing is this seems it's lacking some sparkle and shine, you could give much more shine and a sparkle in the corners and on the pen. But anyways nice job on this great language and I wonder what it all says?

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine and sparkle

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Cyberdevil responds:

It's binary, if you want to look it up. ;) Maybe some shine on the pen yes... but overall not sure I'd go for that style here! Thanks though.

[Shinobi Bad Buddies]

A bunch of baddies

A bunch of baddies here nice effects nice shades and lighting effects, seems like you could make a nice series out of these characters or simular ones, A fantastic piece of art if you ask me, sometimes we dont need to fix anything but if I do find a thing or two ill let you know but you have a nice piece sofar. You have some nice Polished visuals here, So I found your artwork by accident but I must say I became an instant fan of your work and your style, you bring something differnst and unique to the table, So I am honord to review this work here today. So this was a nice blend of creativity.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
seems like you could make a nice series out of these characters or simular ones

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[Falling Dream]

Love the blue

So with this piece you really went all out and presented some beautifull blues and even some lighting effects here and a great "VIEW-POINT" you really made this work well and it shows a very artistic piece of art I think you should make more art like this kind of like in a series, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you should make more art like this kind of like in a series

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[L4D Tank]

Very nice

Now this was pretty good, the mutated body shows deep muscles and a nice form of the character almost like a busted out frank but anyways really nice work, onlything I would change up here would be the "EYES" make them glow a bit but thats just an ideas anyways keep making great stuff here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
onlything I would change up here would be the eyes make them glow a bit

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[Blow a Kiss]

NICE

Wow what a good way to showcase something in terms of a anime type style of woman. Mayne anime isn't your style or what you were going for here, but this just reminds me of much anime or manga art I have seen over the years. I do like the way you've given a body angle that isn't done much in art submissions on here. The way she is laying down with the angle upwards is new and good. It shows you can draw for different perspectives and that is very hard to do and takes talent. A lot of drawing is based on what you see in real life or learning from other art, but you see to have a natural talent to just create something out of your mind. I like the smoke or the "KISS" you have going on here. The way she is just subtly giving out the kiss is nice as if she has no cares in the world to share her feelings and is relaxed in her choices. I think that is what her facial expression is saying here. She likes what she has to offer and is comfortable in her own skin. The outfit is nice and very empowering for her hair type. They go well together because you've given her a lot of hair to showcase her appeal and strength within. You even added puffed up bits of hair to match and tie-in with the smoke kiss. I thought that was a good way to showcase your theme and keep it all together. The flow from hair to kiss to body position was all very good and something I enjoyed to see. I would change the background, because the blue is so very faint that I didn't really notice it much and that is not something you want to lose in this piece because it allows her a glow and floating like feeling that I know you wanted to achieve. I would add some darkness or contrast to that area next time to simple enhance the vibrance of the color and make it a bit more darker and apparent. Good work overall and something different and almost magical. I would love to see more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing to really change except maybe blurring of the trees on the sides could be reduced a few ticks on your blur effect in photoshop.

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[Inktober #19 UFO Sunrise]

Very neat

Wow this one is very neat the clouds are so detailed and deep with texture and even the sky has nice textures with your line art. A very nice work, the "UFO" is unique and actually seems a bit happy. It tells a story that something is happening with using very rich details. I am not sure about improvement here, maybe a sunburst effect where the sun is as the ufo flys over, more shine inside the ufo inself would also be a bonus, but overall good work on something neat and unique.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some light on the sun

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Cyberdevil responds:

Wasn't so happy with the black outlines on this one myself, but glad you seem to see it in a different light! :) Feedback noted!