XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[King Frog]

Nice black and white

So this was a nice black and white drawing I like some of the dteail but seems like you could polish it up a bit more these styles of black and white are notbad and they present a classic form of beauty but anyways you have a nice sketch or black and white design here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some small color might sufice

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[Bird]

Brilliant again

These jokes just get better and better, I like the color added but would love even more color maybe atleast the frames, I know I say brilliant but thats what you make this into a brilliant peice of adventure with some comedy attached and thats what the front line would say about this so keep up the great work and keep it classy and keep it brilliant I love how this series is turning out.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like the color added but would love even more color maybe atleast the frames

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[Packed Lunch]

Cool

Another fun joke and well executed Alright so what Can I say that I have not already said this is a good piece here and all of the ones in the series are I like how each one has a different feel of story to them and while the characters are the same there is still some excitemeant. so thanks for the effort here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some added color for sure.

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[Trooper]

Cool idea

I love things like this. It is very artistic and has good use of coloring and the background makes it all come together in a scifi way and artistic way. Your background was good but a bit blurred and perspectives seemed off, but I did like your blending. The robots facial and detailed eyes really were good. I loved the added touch of a lightning rod in one eye behind the eye. I would recommend more sharpening of the image and more perspective and depth to the background but good job overall.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would just make things a bit sharper.

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[Inktober #11 50 Second Challenge]

Notbad

So this was cool I like that this one only took you a solid 50 seconds and you still managed to come up with something that looks decent. I do think the lines are a bit all over the place in size veriations, so maybe that's something need to watch out for next time you go to do a fast drawing, but I do like the style here and for something that was going to be done so fast, it is not bad at all.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some improved lines for consistency

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Cyberdevil responds:

Well 50 seconds was a challenging time limit. XD I plotted the motive before I started the clock, though. Pretty happy with how it turned out all things considered, but do agree, with time maybe I'll get both faster and better. Thanks!

[Insanity Box 2 chick]

Interesting

Ok this one is not bat and interesting, you have gone for some pixel art again and this time you've included a background to have more pixel type items from the food types of burgers and pies to apples and shakes, and I think that was interesting because it isn't always done like that. You often see other types like flowers or items of weapons when doing a background like this but you took that old way and made it work for the theme you have here. The theme seems to be health and fitness as the women is wearing workout clothing and ready to go work out and train and maybe she is a fitness freak who isn't going to let you stop till you drop or drop dead from over working. I like the way you have her hands doing that peace sign and the way her other hand rests on her hip. This type of body position shows she is ready to go and ready to get to work but also have fun. The blonde in her hair is nice and the the way she smiles was drawn really well for pixel art. I think also the work out clothing was a good choice to make her look and the feeling she wants to give you that you're going to have a good workout. I would like to see more of her body next time, maybe her feet as those seem to be cropped out but that is fine for now, but try adding more of her body next time so we get the entire picture of this girl. Overall great stuff and hoping to see more soon from you.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more of her body in this next time, zoom out to include feet and the rest of her but good job on this one right here.

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[Bestfriends]

Very romintic piece

this was a delightfull piece and shows off some really nice elements of detail, my tip is I wish the rain was more domminant but I guess its a light rain, These types of pieces are always artistic and they brings something new to the table, thats why im a fan of these types of art and skill types, and seems like you did put fourth some effort and bringing some good creativity to the boards, making for a decent and artistic piece. My thaughts on this are that its a slick and beautiful piece and on my ending thaughts you really did bring out the creative mind though otherwise feels it might have looked nicer with less, but you have a great piece of work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
my tip is I wish the rain was more domminant but I guess its a light rain

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[Cool.. a turtle]

Notbad

A good cartoon look on your art here. I like the overall unique style and the character has a good face. I dont see why you have a 3 rating when this is something very good. I think you could make a full animation out of this but dont hurt the turtle, the green color over the turtle and only the turtle is very unique and makes a statement but you could use more shading if you are keeping this black and white everywhere else. The tree in perticular looks bare but overall I think you have something good here.

THINGS TO IMPROVE ON
just add more shading to the tree and others places and maybe turn this into an animation at some point

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[Inktober #12 5 Second Challenge]

Simple

So this was cool I like the simple nature of this one and it seems to be another one of your faster drawings, this time at 5 seconds. I think for 5 seconds this is actually pretty decent but too simple. I think you could have set the background color quick to be blue and then did a bit of green on the bottom portion. I bet you could save time by not signing the piece to give it a little extra. I mean, for a 5 second drawing, do you really need to have the signature?

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background effort and detail

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Cyberdevil responds:

The signature's excluded in the time above, as mentioned. :) Just feels like it's a signature thing, you know? Glad you're appreciating even these rushed ones!

[Father's Day]

Very entertaining

Very nice wouldnt mind some color though or a little bit, What I love the most about these are that you can make them entertaining even with this one started out average but you really bring a climax to it making it pretty fun and entertaining so I thank you for that effeort and energy that you bring across the table. so keep it real and keep making these awsome pieces.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
wouldnt mind some color though or a little bit

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