Very colorful
Wow I have to say this was a delughtful piece here with all the color and characters kind of reminds me a bit of sponge bob type characters but it also has its own twist as well, you are greatly talented, you have captured something positive with this piece, the talent shows and the flashes with passion so your desire is strong here and you bring lots of energy into it so nice job indeed here.
~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Ad maybe a crazy border or frame with some color so its like a fancy gallery piece.
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