XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[RS Redline Series 1 Page 2]

Wow

You sure do know how to make a beautiful comic here some really beautiful view shots here you have some really deep detail love the backdrop scene here keep up the amazing work as always I hope to see more soon

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Beautiful comic scenes no need for changes

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[RS Redline Series 1 Page 1: Legal Info]

This is cool

So here is the comic and I like how you start this off with some nice elements about it really cool idea here you have some nice ideas and a good concept here keep it up this was an interesting first page

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Just make more beautiful comics

~X~

[RS Redline Series 1 Cover]

Beautiful cover

So this is a really nice cover I like the front view and distance view points in this making it a solid cover so really nice job here you have an amazing piece of art here look forward to the comic and all the art that is related to it

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Nice comic theme make more soon

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[Eccentric Blood-Moon Doctor WIP]

Well here was a nice view

So here was a nice view of some nice charchter colors are not deep in textuture but maybe you could ad some shine and sparkle on the blade of the weapon and some color depth within the clothing and on top of all that I would even suggest some background props or even a painted design of some sort too but anyways you have a great charchter here so nice job on this one

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
A few details as mentioned above

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RaidingBlades responds:

Thanks for the critique. I don't have a background here but here is a fully colored version here: https://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/assassinjoe1/eccentric-blood-moon-doctor

[What's up my sleeve?]

Nice one

So this was cool fully clothed with some nice texture in the outfit and a nice slogan of what's up my sleeve would have loved some background detail this particular piece it's pretty awesome work here very nice work indeed

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
As mentioned some background detail here

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[Some Alone Time]

Nice

So this was a nice scene here the colortone you use is really nice and seems to jump out at you with deep textuture and the characters pose and structure was really nice here so really good work here I hope to see more

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Another fine piece that does not need any changes

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[Yelsa's Second Mutation -SFW-]

The soft version

I saw the other one and it was nice this one leaves more to the imagination the background is solid work and the base is some wickedly looking element here you have some nice colortone here and a great charchter of course

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
No changes with this one you have done an outstanding job

~X~

[Luke Sarah and Yelsa -Battle Ready-]

A great combo

And here is a great combo of charchters such great poses here and you have a great background potentially could have more background to it maybe some added elements and props but anyways really great combo here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some added elements to the background

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[Yulasa Devourer of Evil]

Another great design

So here was another great design nice backdrop scene and a nice charchter I think some added glow surrounding the character would do well here and maybe a sparkle along the tile floor just an idea or two

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I have suggested an idea or two

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[Yelsa Noodom -Daughter of Darkness-]

Nice

So this was nice and some good color use here I love what you have done with the eyes and the demon like features you really made a great demon like creature here great color here I would say make more great charchters like this

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Make more

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