XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[My Destiny]

Nice work

So this was kind of cool here I like it because it looks like a cool cover my only suggestion is that the name at lower right could have more of a glow or highlight about it so it shows more of the name instead of of blended in the background anyways nice cover

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
As suggested above

~X~

[IRL Vector 03]

Very nice

Wow this was cool and nice to see how the yoke of the egg is spilling over and the nice dahses of detail in the egg I think a more glossy look of the egg would have been cool here too but overall this was a nice art piece here and really does look like an egg

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Maybe adding a glossy look would be cool

~X~

[Whale]

Beautiful

Now this was some beautiful design here with some beautiful color themes and some really fresh art style I love that fresh look about it all it just seems to come together with all the pleasent colors so nice job here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Maybe make a series out of these fresh color themes and shapes

~X~

[Little Girl, Big Weapons]

Very cute

So this was very cute here I love the background and vibrant colors here you have some nice 3-D effects here but the colors are really nice too really made this shine I would ad some sparkles on the guns

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Ad some sparkles on the guns

~X~

[Rakers]

Wow nice group of characters

Wow this was a nice group of characters here some very fine details on this one you really have an eye for detail here so some nice work indeed, I think all this needs is maybe a frame or borders type of thing to make it like a gallery piece, anyways great art here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
some frame or borders

~X~

[Maria Calavera, The Grim Reaper]

Wow nice

Dang you do some amazing work here that waepon was intense I would love to see a more dominant shine on the blade but you have it all nice as it is, the character design is welldone too some real nice structure on this character keep up the amazing work as always.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I would love to see a more dominant shine on the blade but you have it all nice as it is

~X~

[Yabou Yuukan]

Nifty 3-D

The swod is beautiful would have been cool to see a glare on top of the blade or more shine on it, You have a nact for this "3-D" stuff and it really shows off well, your design is silky smooth and it showcases well, you have a "SWELL-DESIGN-HERE" "3-D" is not easy to do but you seem to make it look easy so "PROPS-TO-YOU" for an amazing design here with this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
would have been cool to see a glare on top of the blade or more shine on it

~X~

[Reagan - COMMISSION]

Beautiful character

so this was some really nice work here some really nice expression too, the hair design is really nice as is the shine on it seems like it would have been nice if you had some backdrop to represent it all a little better, but besides all that you have some really nice work here love your style of art.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
would have been nice if you had some backdrop to represent it all a little better

~X~

OthalaM responds:

It was commissioned, so it wasn't really my choice to leave out the background

[Monsieur Kato Chan]

A cute character

So this was a cute little character here I love the face or head you have and you have some nice body form too, some added backround on this might be a plus, but overall this was a great art piece and great character you have created so keep up the good work.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
some added backround on this might be a plus

~X~

Calybar responds:

thank you, appreciate your comment and feedback. Will definitely work on the background

[Tick Tock]

3-D At its best

I love the shine on this I would go one step further and ad some sparle effects on the shine points, Theres a certain structure that only 3-D can achieve and for me and in my eyes you have Achieved that with this 3-D piece, I have to say 3-D is also hard to review but you have done "SUCH-A-NICE-JOB" here it was nice to see "ALL-THE-SHARP-DESIGN" of this 3-D idea and element.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I would go one step further and ad some sparle effects on the shine points

~X~

Nanakisan responds:

Honestly after 10 years I should attempt to redo this particular piece. I appreciate your comment!