XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[-Distant Seas Remix-]

Love it

~~REVIEW~~
Thought i would get back to some of your older stuff, and i forgot how {CUTE} this was, its so neat and light and fresh and really love what you did with the {FLUTE} in here well i think its a flute hehe, if i am wrong i am sorry but anyways, good tune here i think i will ad this one to my faveourites, very nifty tune here, now if i can find anything wrong or something to improve on, you got me there, but anyways i love how the flute is part of the main focus on this, i would totally use this in a flash, i can see something on an small beach or even forrest, but anyways great tune, i am in love with it already, so very nice job on this even if its older, anyways for now keep up on the awsome tunes.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Bring in other backround stuff maybe some very distant chimes or even violin something very soft though so it doesnt take away feom the flute, but to be honest i really like this tune.

~X~

Step responds:

Wow, a 9 from you on a song as old as this? O.o

Haha I didn't think it was possible, thanks! I wouldn't call it cute though, more like horrible, but to each his own xD.

Yeah, there's a flute in here, along with some other stuff which I'm not sure about since this song is in MIDI (horrible quality) and my friend added the instruments (I did the melody).

Regarding your suggestions, you have some very good ideas, it will definitely sound more 'distant'.

Thanks for the review, if you like songs like this then you might like my song Morning Horizon, although that's a bit more epic. Thanks again!

[Post Rigor Mortis]

Needs a quality check

~~REVIEW~~
Now this one starts off with an odd sound, lots of {SOUND/FX} you used in this one, you slowly pick it up with new and interesting sound/fx, i think you build it up too slow though, so that would be my first {SUGGESTION} of approval on this one, also noticed abit of {SCRATCHY-NESS} to it, now there were all sorts of sounds and even some odd ones, making this tune interesting and abit unique, so not sure what exactly to think of it, but it was very differant, to be honest i think it did have too much sound/fx, you should cut it down abit so there is just a few and add more of a music like tune to it so it balances out somehow, towards the end you can really hear the scratchyness though, anyways good luck on any improvments you do make on this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have the start of it have a {FASTER} buildup, the sound quality could use some work aswell though, seemed abit scratchy at times, there was alot of scratchyness towards the ladder end and middle just made it more distorted and all, also you have too much stuff in there making it sound too crowded.

~X~

PizzaBox responds:

Everything you told me to improve on was intentional. It's called death industrial, and this is what it's supposed to sound like.

[[CG]-Imperfect Serenity]

Nice tune

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat, kinda differant, but you did present something really good here, and seems to have a good quality abouot it aswell, with the tone you got going with it, this would be just perfect with some sorta {VOCALS} seems like its the perfect tone for some, but for what it is, its very impressive, if i can suggest any {IMPROVMENTS} at all i might say add them vocals, maybe you could work with someone and this tune, it would greatly improve on something you have here, on another note i wouldnt mind some more {DEEPER} sounds maybe with some {DRUMS} or something, but for the mostpart its pretty good stuff i thought.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some deeper sounds, maybe some deeper drums, but this would be most fitting if it had some sorta vocals.

~X~

KroweMusic responds:

Yeah...vocals would be a very nice addition but I don't have a microphone so I can't do anything about it unless someone would like to volunteer to add some. Deeper sounds would be nice as well. I might have to add some one day.

Thanks for the helpful review!

[-RG- In a Teardrop]

Great tune here

~~REVIEW~~
Oh wow this is pretty neat, it starts out very neat with all the {CHIMES} i think its chimes and some drums come into play very nice indeed, and has just this whole great feel of some battle thats about to take place, and i guess thats you {SUPERSEPH54} heh didnt know, but anyways back to the audio, love how you really build this up and really push it with each and every new tunes, it sounds so familular like some movie i seen or something, another nice touch is how the volume and tone gets better as it progresses towards the end, very well indeed, i am very impressed with this, maybe some of your best work yet to date, so keep on with the awsome tracks and great feel with awsome buildup which was the best part.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was all great only issue is when it does build up to the highest point there is some slight scratchyness but that could just be me, and really its nothing at alll.

~X~

Raven-Guard responds:

Thanks for the review :D.

The intro actually has a xylophone, not chimes xP. Although I don't blame you for thinking it's chimes, they sound quite similar.

You're not the first to say it sounds like a battle, lol. Thanks.

Just pointing out that I'm not the only one who made this track. I did the drums, some EQing and helped think of a name, but Darklight did the rest.

Really glad you liked the buildups, we definitely think they're our best. Glad you were impressed by it, and I agree with you about the 'scratchyness' thing. That's me slacking of in EQing *blush*.

Thanks for reviewing!
--
Supersteph54

[Powerfull6]

Notbad could be better

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm now this one was kinda like that last one with the {GUITAR} but seems its more of a {RE-MIX} not sure if this one is on my top lists of great stuff the sounds of mixing in and out is to visable, and kinda just ruins the track there, you should have it mix in and out but so it doesnt hear them sounds, kinda odd i thought, dont get me wrong i like the mix, and like the original abit better, but dont think the mix needs that change with the sounds so visable, well hope the other mixes are better though. as to improve remove that sliding sound somehow.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try and lower the sound of the mixing in and out seems kinda odd.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Thanks for the review!

[Powerfull5]

Nice guitar

~~REVIEW~~
Now this one sounds familular, cant say where i heard it from but does sound, kinda reminds me something like from {KILL-BILL} kinda though, this is actually a good kicking track i could groove too, i think thats a guitar in there and thats my fave instrament so really nice job on that part, the {QUALITY} is not all that great but its good, maybe a better mic? not sure what it is, but like i said this is pretty good and your best piece of that i reviewed, anyways nice work, make more stuff like this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The quality could be better there was some static with the guitar, not sure if it was the mic other equipment or what but something could be cleaned up

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Thanks for the review!

[Creep]

Nice sound/fx

~~REVIEW~~
This was more for the sound/fx of everything, i mean its a good little loop for all that, and i hear a gun being {LOADED} or something, this loop with your other loop that has the gunshot might work very well together maybe you could even combine the two for an even more awsome track or loop in this case, i like the little {SCI-FI} tune even gives it an unique style about it, so nice job there once again. anyways keep up the awsome and unique work., good luck on anything new you may make.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a gun shot along with the gun loading, just a thought though

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Yeah, a gunshot might fit in, or maybe it would ruin the "spooky" mood, give it too much action, IDK, thanks for the feedback though!

[Basicbeat11]

Ad a few more beats with this one

~~REVIEW~~
well you are right it is a simple short, its great as a loop, for my im more into the longer tunes , but as for this loop, it could be part of some action scene i could see, i am really glad to see alot of your stuff being used in flash movies and games so props to you for that, but anyways this was a nice little beat, if i could suggest anything it probably would be to add more beats in with the ones you already got, but thats just me liking the longer stuff, but anyways it was a good beat i look forward to hearing more of your stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
a few more drum beats would be nice.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Thanks for the review!

[Suspense]

Nice end effect

~~REVIEW~~
This one hasa darker feel and with the {GUN-SHOT} at the end, makes for a good loop to use in other flashes, so that was a nice touch with the gun shot, i wouldnt mind it being a tad {LONGER} though kinda have it build up to the gunshot and that may even give a much better end result for flashes and this little loop of yours, just an idea though, but a good one i think, i am even thinking maybe the gun shot should be abit louder aswell. something to try out i suppose, anyways good work on this one, nice end result to.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
a more louder gunshot would be nice, and also abit longer in the buildup

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Thanks for the review!

[Newer]

Nice and fresh

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm this is actually a pretty catchy tune, i like how you gave this lots of freshness and just a kicking song here, i had thought i had reviewed all your stuff guess not, but anyways, this was a good track {LOOP} or something i am not sure if i heard the other version but i will so i can see how it changed and stuff, but anyways this was pretty nifty and {CUTE} so props to you on a wonderful track or loop, wish it was a tad longer. And neat i tottally forgot this was used in a movie i took part in hehe nice work, anyways nice job and keep up the neat tracks.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer and keep it fresh as you do have

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Thanks for the review!