Interesting
Well what can I say I am no expert on singing I can tell you that but this was notbad of a tune I found it to be short though so would have liked to hear more of it like more of a song like go in different portions of the song, and some parts can be repeated and such, I love the name of it though and your "VOICE" is sharp and clean, I could see you speeding it up a bit more too but then you would really have to stretch out some more lines for the song, You should listen to my fave audio artist "LADY ARSENIC" you would see what I mean about faster and longer but also at the same time, its really nice work you have here and hope you make more like this. very beautiful sounds comming from this. Rhythm thats what I will say with trhis piece here you gave it good rhythm, Really nice effort on this piece, it was a solid piece of quality and I really liked what you did with this piece, and would love to checkout more of your work soon. It will be Fascinating. Anyways keep up the great work and make more audio sometime.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some faster tones and some build up to the faster and longer ofcourse.
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