XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Twitter Bird]

Tweet

~~REVIEW~~
Wow this was a pretty good idea you have here, the colors and texture was very in-depth, i like the amount of detail you put into this, im thinking there is something to make this abit more like the twitter version and theme

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some quotes all around in the backround as to show all the tweets and such

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[Deus Warmachine]

nice design

~~REVIEW~~
You have a nice design here and i like all the differant models and differant versions, i find that this art piece is abit on the smaller side so maybe you could make it larger

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the view screen abit larger as to see more of the details and such

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[Violence]

nice creature here

~~REVIEW~~
this was pretty good, i like the creature and even like the killing of the man, even the blood is good, this art piece could look better and more realistic if there was some sorta blood spatter on the ground

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some blood spatter on the ground, give it that more realistic feel

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[Cloak's doin' Kill Bill]

Its entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
This was so-so the colors seemed not right there is not much texture, and shades in the colors, you made a decent design though, maybe the character itself needs abit more personality though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add more characteristics to the character

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[On the Roof Tops]

hmmm notbad

~~REVIEW~~
the character was the main focus here which seems very welldone, but that building in the backround doesnt match to well, the main character has a 3d feel while the building is more of a "FLAT" feel to it and all

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Work on making the building not look so flat it needs some sorta 3d portions so that it all matches with the character at hand

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BearPawMedia responds:

Thank ya very much ^_^

Yeah, I need to work on my backgrounds for sure. >_<

[{BT} The Musician]

I like this

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat like a silince of moment, this was bland in the backround but that might be for the best if anything you could add some audiance in the backround maybe just the heads

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Like above add some shadowed people in the backround

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BenTibbetts responds:

Thanks for the review. I agree, people might make a nice addition to this scene.

[Sword of Omega]

Decent work

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm well this was decent, the "TEXT" was abit hard to see since it was so small but the weapon itself was pretty impressive with some nice design to it and all, work on the text abit though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Increase the text size on the info stuff

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[Primal Fire]

Nice character you created

~~REVIEW~~
Oh nice character here looks like he just got outa battle now this art piece is notbad at all, its texture seems abit on the bland side i think, so maybe to change that abit i have posted a few ideas below good luck on other stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
First off i would like to see the sword with a brighter red maybe blood goo is dripping but give it the redish color, and then i could see the eyes glowing maybe a green or orange

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[Furry Little Creature]

Cute

Haha well this was a cute furry creature that you have created here, you did everything from even a shadow, shich not alot of people think of, everything seemed the one color though,

I would really like to see the backround like a differant color

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[Venice Courtyard]

Nice and soft

~~REVIEW~~
This has some soft colors to it, its all a nice and pleasent image, im thinking it could still be improved on maybe abit of sunlight and some shine on the staute, anyways just a few things to try look below for more details

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well as said have the "SUNLIGHT" come through the top opening like the sun is beating down and or have there be a shine or sparkle on that statue there in the center courtyard

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VidGameDude responds:

your absolutely right.

i knew the statue could not be seen as well as i hoped but this was the best angle i could get and i don't know how to make such advanced affects you ask of but its all good.

thanks for your your review, its always appreciated!

l8s